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Rapunzel - Once Upon a Time

Once upon a time, in a high tower there lived a young child Child played by herself and always smiled Smiled like there was no tomorrow Tomorrow came and she started to grow Grow and saw a change though she didn’t quite know Know that she was becoming a young lady with sorrow Sorrow and tears looking out the window Window wondering what was at the end of the rainbow Rainbow end of a meadow stood a prince Prince entranced by her ethereal voice Voice he searched that was in a tower Tower he couldn’t reach to get to her Her guardian came for a visit and stands Stands at the bottom of the tower and demands Demands; Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair, Hair so that I may climb the golden stair Stair to climb, upon hearing these words fall Fall to be repeated after the guardian left Rapunzel Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair, Hair so that I may climb the golden stair Stair of beautiful blond hair was let down for him to scale Scale to get to the top of the tower if proper conditions prevail Prevail to rescue the fair maiden Maiden he wanted her hand in marriage and won Won and married the pretty maiden Maiden gave birth to twins, daughter and son Lived in the prince kingdom, where they live happily ever after Away from the tower 2/2/2016 Poetry Contest : Once Upon A Time Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 2/8/2016 8:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:39:00 AM
Well done, Eve, I love a happy ending. Viv x
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:16:00 PM
Your repeated word form is unique, Eve. Congrats.
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:21:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:11:00 PM
Congrats Eve on your lovely placement!
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:28:00 AM
I like where you took this tale and the form you used. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:17:00 AM
well done with a twist.. super congrats on your placement,eve..huggs
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:00:00 AM
I love the tale you told Eve congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 10:49:00 AM
Eve, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement! This is an outstanding write...*smiles* -luloo
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Date: 2/3/2016 9:17:00 PM
Eve, thank you for the sweet reply. LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2016 5:53:00 PM
beautiful! happily ever after<3, enjoyed Eve.. good luck in the contest:) @-> LINDA <-@
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thank you sweet friend :)
Date: 2/3/2016 10:58:00 AM
your fairytale went swell, I'm sure it would even sell because it's anything but stale with such Beauty that's beheld as if the holy grail appeared, and you tell it well....nicely done eve....;)
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eric, hugs sweet friend :)
Date: 2/3/2016 5:54:00 AM
I have never seen this form and I'm captivated by it. I know it was not easy ... CayCay
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 10:51:00 AM
Hello CayCay, this a chain verse from one of the contest a while back . I enjoy using it because of the following lines.:-)
Date: 2/3/2016 12:24:00 AM
LOVE THE STORY AND THE FORM YOU USED! Pleasure to read you work tonight my friend.. A7
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Robert, for the complement an the high rating :-)

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