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Ramesses Ii, Remembered Still

No raised pinnacle marked the place No pure white limestone shining Where Ramesses slept looked commonplace to foil the robbers scrying. Yet he had moved the earth and sky this pharaoh disdained all rivals. His bounty buried beneath the sand portrayed a life beneath blue skies his star encrusted tomb ethereal his Ka rising from Death’s hand. The hills of Thebes his place of rest and beneath him his father lay amongst the great he’d be the highest his battle standards on display. He ruled with iron hand on staff as a Godhead he was portrayed. Most mighty and acclaimed, no man was he, who felled the Hittite chaff; beneath his chariots wheels flayed the denizens of Egypt’s land. Worshiped was he in temples true his semblance graces Abu Simbel with eyes wide o’er lake so blue his gaze belays the infidels. Beside him she, Nefertari laid claim to a sacred place held above all others his wife most renowned for her beauty a love to last through time and space may all true hearts pay such tariff.

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Date: 1/10/2011 10:23:00 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Deb. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/31/2010 3:04:00 PM
Wasn't he the bad guy in the Bible? and didn't he want to keep the children of Israel as slaves? this is the same Ramses u write of here? I only remember how mean he was in The Ten Commandments movie... and did he really keep up with all those wives? wonderful write TEACH...
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:54:00 PM
I love the flow of your work,the elements of your poetry are very balanced and have such energy.
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:53:00 PM
The feeling i got was warm and sad all mixed up together. see someone care so deeply and hoping the child would be OK!
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful remembrance of this great Egyptian king, who was perhaps the best among all the Pharaoh. You have sketched a brilliant picture of his otherwise forgotten achievements for Egypt my friend. It is a mile stone monument crafted by you for this great hero of the bygone history. I have placed a new Poem 'Rain, The Story'. Hope you would read it. My good wishes for a Happy and Prosperous New Year....Ravindra...Deborah Guzzi
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Deborah. Thank you for your comments and all the help you have given to me this past year. I appreciate all you have done. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 3:46:00 AM
It has been a while since have read your most excellent writes. Nice piece so profesionally done by one of the Soups best.
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