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Rainy Day Memories - Contest

The fine rain is falling filling my nostrils will melancholy remembering family days, walking the country lanes, the perfume of honeysuckle heavy in the air besides the freshnesss of hay and mown grass Looking across the valley where Mamgu would be waving a tea towel from the cottage door. A signal to tell us lunch will be ready in half hour quickening our footsteps we cross fields climb stiles to be home on time. This is holidaying in West Wales Where purity still raises its head Where a fine shower brings out the nuances of nature to install in our memories So that a rainy day brings us back to happy carefree family times. To nature, to the family, to memories. The pitter patter of rain supplies all of these emotions. *Mamgu - Grandmother Penned on 10 November 2013 by Seren Roberts Contest : Fragrance of Rain

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Date: 11/24/2013 7:16:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. All the best. Tfs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/8/2013 2:01:00 AM
Thank you Ravi...Seren
Date: 11/10/2013 6:48:00 PM
When the reader can feel as if he is there, with all his senses, and feel what you write, well it means a great poem my friend!
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Date: 11/10/2013 8:33:00 PM
Thank you ...Seren
Date: 11/10/2013 2:42:00 PM
Those are great emotions to have and to remember my friend! I surely loved reading this emotion filled write of yours this afternoon Seren! It's nice to see you posting again, I have missed you and your poetry! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2013 8:33:00 PM
Hi Russell thank you...Seren
Date: 11/10/2013 9:35:00 AM
Very nice... Terry
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2013 8:34:00 PM
AwwTerry thts nice of you to stop by ....Seren
Date: 11/10/2013 4:55:00 AM
Wonderful write Seren, overflowing with nostalgia and sweet memories...When I am stressed out and anxious, I often call up such memories - Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2013 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Tim ...Seren

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