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Rainbow Lorikeets

In summer showers sunlight breaks into rainbows As lorikeet's play © Brenda V Northeast 23/ Jan./ 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2012 2:25:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed my poem, Bren. I wrote both of those this morning, so they are hot off the press so to speak. Hope you had a wonderful day. We are still getting heaps of rain here. Thank God we live up high with views of Noosa Beach, so don't get flooded here. God bless, Maureen
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:20:00 PM
whats a lorikeet?
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:39:00 PM
In Australia they are one of our native parrots that have lovely rainbow colors all over them- they are a very playful bird and noisy. I shall try and put some photo's into my photo space. I took many photo's of them from my mothers garden once when I visited her in Bundaberg, Qld, Australia.
Date: 1/23/2012 7:05:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very creative indeed..When one reads from the poems listed in the featured poems list, just click on comment on this poem at the top of the poem on the right hand side and it will take you where you need to go..I hope that this will help you in the future..Thanks for the kind review of my work and saying that you read my work about the Iris...I too enjoy those beautiful flowers..I have a few that are rebloomers and bloom twice in a year..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:10:00 PM
I really like this, Brenda. Love the imagery. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/23/2012 10:15:00 AM
Wonderful seasonal imagery. For someome new to writing haiku, you are doing a beautiful job.
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Date: 1/23/2012 7:23:00 AM
Thanks, Bren, for your kind comment. Love, Maureen xx
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Date: 1/23/2012 6:13:00 AM
very good Brenda..
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Date: 1/23/2012 5:57:00 AM
Lovely,Brenda! :) oxox love Anne-Lise
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