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Rain Rain Rain - Contest

Whats that i hear Someone, something calling out for me I am way up here in the clouds Will try and reach you soon Its getting so dark up here I am bursting , poof I am free Look up I am on my way Sorry I am so cold, enjoy me The flowers and the trees are shaking Pleasure and desire all theirs I am the giver and taker of life I am Rain no one can live without me. 27 May 2013

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Nato Calubiran

Date: 5/30/2013 8:15:00 PM

we both lost on this contest, sadly. (/>_<)/ _|__|_

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/30/2013 9:15:00 PM

Never mind Nato its nice to read the winning entries....Seren

Noel Villarosa

Date: 5/28/2013 4:08:00 AM

A lovely read, a feeling of wanderlust to feel free the beauty of reuniting with someone or to something else. Thank you also for a wonderful comment to my poem. (^_^) Noel.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 6:13:00 AM

oops left out the words Thank You

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 4:59:00 AM

Hello Noel, for stopping by and commenting ...Seren

Nato Calubiran

Date: 5/28/2013 1:08:00 AM

Nice poem. the importance of rain, lovely. I also joined this contest, my entry is "Crimson Fall". Best of lucks to both of us.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2013 4:58:00 AM

Hi Nato will go and read your entry Thanks for stopping by ..Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/27/2013 5:30:00 AM

I just love the perspective you took for this contest! That was a very awesome way to write a poem, cleverly done my friend! I love this amazing piece Seren, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2013 11:22:00 AM

thank you Russell ...Seren