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Rain Forest

The sun's yellow rays filtered though the gray skies
The foliage damp from the previous rain
The humidity clung like a leech would cling to the skin
I could not wipe the dampness away
Sunbeams drenched upon my back
My face became droplets of moisture
Clinging ,with no where to escape
The heat intensifies and the greenery sprung forth
The petals delighting in the new precipitation
As the  rainbow began to fade in the sky
I am walking where life and death hold constant beauty.

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  1. Date: 6/26/2012 6:26:00 AM
    I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Phyllis. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 8:21:00 PM
    this is wonderfully descriptive, Phyllis. Almost as if you had been to this place! (petals for pedals). REally enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Beautiful your poem a lot.

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Deep and well written Phyllis. I like your poem from the beginning to the end. - love from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 12:28:00 PM
    I can feel the humidity, wonderful descriptive phrases.