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Oh, the sweet drumming of rain and tapping of raindrops, the great loud thunder, and whispering, swishing, . . . . . . splashing of cars; cleansing the city, oh the distant rolling and deep echoing, then the power and anger of a summer rain storm. Wet foliage and the call of hidden birds chirping melodies, the muffled hum and the constant dripping of the storm; flashes and flickering of lightning in the dark streaked sky, oh sweet the dripping, dripping, dripping, dripping, dripping, . . . . . . . dripping, dripping. The hush of fading raindrops and the gentleness that embraces, peacefulness and tranquility wrap around me like a dark cloak; oh, the hypnotizing rain, rain, rain . . . . . . . . . . . . . falling, falling, falling, falling, and the sweet scented fresh smell of my flower garden. A calmness envelopes my heart, soul and spirit in peace, oh, the stillness after, . . . . . . . the cleansing beauty of a rainstorm. _________________________ Written September 8, 2012 Poetry/Free Verse/"Sweet Rain" Copyright Protected, ID 12- 737-618-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to, Mid Summer Standard sponsor, Brian Strand Second Place ________________________________ Submitted to the contest, Any Free Verse, 150 Words sponsor, Laura Loo Third Place ________________________________ Submitted to the contest, Rain sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 7/21/2017 9:00:00 AM
Oh how I love a good storm, too! "... and the sweet scented fresh smell of my flower garden." Congrats, Constance!
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Date: 7/20/2017 5:07:00 PM
I so love the rain, BW, and I adore this gorgeous piece of writing excellence ... thanks so much for sharing, and congrats on your win!! :-)
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:10:00 AM
Captivating peacefulness, congratulations BW...
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:24:00 AM
Amazing and enjoyable rain write, Constance, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:32:00 PM
Constance, you did it again, you're on a winning roll well done!
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:28:00 PM
Such great truths you bring us, Constance. : ) Incredibly compelling.
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Date: 2/23/2017 8:56:00 PM
so relaxing and soothing to my soul. Beautiful flow...lovely poem for a very lovely lady~ thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 12/27/2015 6:29:00 AM
Very powerful and great expressions in there , this is a very brilliant and mesmerizing poem...I'm glad I've stopped by to read it...hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/27/2015 6:20:00 PM
Dalia, oh I love those words brilliant and mesmerizing, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 12/25/2015 12:41:00 AM
A powerful and deep write that touched my soul. A beautiful poem and well penned. :) Love, The Blue Poet xoxo
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Date: 12/25/2015 7:31:00 AM
Chris, thanks for that lovely comment and compliment and oh I love that word beautiful !!
Date: 12/24/2015 3:51:00 PM
Back again, this time to congratulate you on a fine win with this serene piece!
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Date: 12/24/2015 4:30:00 PM
Robert, thank you so much for the congratulations, appreciate
Date: 12/24/2015 9:23:00 AM
Constance this is an excellent win.
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:39:00 PM
Michael thanks for visiting my poem today and for the nice comment
Date: 12/24/2015 3:23:00 AM
Beautiful, enchanting verse I may say! Congrats for your placement in the contest, Broken Wings! ;-)
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:46:00 AM
Teddy, oh I do love those words beautiful and enchanting, and thanks for the congrats!
Date: 12/24/2015 2:11:00 AM
Broken,, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smile & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:47:00 AM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations and seasons greetings to your also ~
Date: 12/24/2015 1:45:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Constance!
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:48:00 AM
Upma, I love the word "lovely" and thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 12/24/2015 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I really liked your descriptive poetry and the art was perfect for it.
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:49:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations, so appreciated ~
Date: 12/23/2015 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your, Broken Wing! 11+
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Date: 12/23/2015 7:42:00 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting and the congratulations and the 11 !!!!
Date: 12/23/2015 4:23:00 PM
Broken Wings. Congrats on your win. I enjoyed the read. "I sip...........O the stillness...." Blessings. Curtis
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Date: 12/23/2015 7:42:00 PM
Curtis, thanks for the congrats and the nice comment ~
Date: 12/23/2015 4:17:00 PM
So very soothing and peaceful, Broken Wings. I too love rainy days with the same emotions and images your lovely poem presents. Congratulations on your nice placement. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/23/2015 7:44:00 PM
Sandra, oh thanks for the congratulations and the lovely and the 7!!
Date: 12/23/2015 10:25:00 AM
This is a beautifully peaceful image feast of rain's gifts my friend. A truly fine and shining entry in Silent One's latest contest.A7
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Date: 12/23/2015 12:01:00 PM
Robert, thank you for visiting my rain, oh I do love that word beautiful, and thanks for the 7~
Date: 12/22/2015 9:21:00 PM
Serene images fill my mind. You've set a peaceful mood.
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Date: 12/22/2015 10:06:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting and I love that word serene ~

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