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Rain, Rain, Fall Down On Me!

Rain, Rain, Fall down on me! Please take away my Pain. Rain, Rain, Fall down on me! Be my freind not my enimy. Rain, Rain, Fall down on me! Be my escape. Rain, Rain, Fall down on me!

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Jay Loveless

Date: 5/7/2009 8:01:00 AM

Walking in the rain...so no one can tell that your crying... i know the feeling Em. ~Jese

Shirin Neshat

Date: 4/30/2009 10:21:00 AM

nice flow.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/25/2009 1:51:00 PM

I love the rain Emily. Sometimes I feel as though it washes away all my troubles and leaves me renewed. Great write. Love, Shar

Not Anymore

Date: 4/25/2009 11:14:00 AM

I like the message, not the grammar.

Julie Loveless

Date: 4/21/2009 2:36:00 PM

awww emers this is cute!:)