R a I N - the Lanturne Style

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~Rain~ (Lanturne Suite) Rain Falls down Peacefully Washing clean the Earth At Times falls Violently With thunders and Storms We Need rain For growing Many things we Eat Rain Refreshes Creates life All over this Earth. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 November.12.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Lanturne" is a Japanese form or style shaped like a Japanese paper lantern.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/13/2016 4:57:00 AM

And it rained here this morning, Dorian:) a simple and lovely write:) great form used:)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/22/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jo, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 11/12/2016 4:38:00 PM

Simplicity shines here, truly original. pleasure to read Dorian! Keith

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/22/2016 6:28:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Keith, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2016 4:17:00 PM

I too have written about rain today - a lovely form you have brought to us Dorian:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/22/2016 6:28:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:) Hugs!D