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R.I.P

i sit at your grave on my hands and knees crying out to God begging and asking please save this young girl from herself as she runs from the pain she once felt she cuts to kill she learned to not cry it eases the pain to not know inside life was too hard for her so she thinks so im on the ground begging to God please dont take her away yet dont let her die shes only fourteen she has her whole life. i stand in the rain flowers in one hand dressed in all black why couldnt she understand life isnt about death its about your time you cant make it happen just like i cant make this ryme it just does death isnt as exiting as being alive R.I.P kristin mceenly hopefully you now have a better life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/15/2009 6:57:00 AM
so sorrowfull and very hard for those with hope to understand but happening all to often! Light, Love & well come
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:39:00 AM
its real good comment mines please
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Date: 2/24/2009 9:22:00 AM
Scary poem, but they don't cut to kill, they cut to relieve pain inside. They cut as a form of release. The bastards who caused it walk free. I'm a fan of street justice for the predators. The court system doesn't work. Vince
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Date: 2/20/2009 10:49:00 AM
Arianne, your wonderful poem made me cry for the loss of one so young. Beautiful tribute! I hope her parents are coping with their loss in a positive way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2009 7:37:00 AM
wow. . . powerful piece. . .great write. . ~best wishes~ *Breana
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Date: 1/12/2009 7:00:00 AM
Wow lot of emotion in this i can feel it, it is very well written at the most good job arianne. Dustin
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Date: 1/9/2009 6:53:00 AM
Powerful piece of poetry. Welcome.
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Date: 1/9/2009 6:50:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup! A sad and poignant piece full of heartfelt emotion. Well done Arianne! God bless, Keith
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