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I met a woman with body so firm and fresh Tasted without shame the love’s powers Amazed and gazed upon the mound Venus In the velvet cavity between her thighs. To be ravished on the linen dearly paid Let her ache for thrust of male firmness Let her loins hunger to have me inside Feel her two points of two love globes. Loosen the manhood beneath her clothes Drew it into her entrails with a mighty thrust Evaded her body voluptuous and sensuous Made love causing dislodge her bones so cute. In the clench of his fist man’s power lies But the power of woman elsewhere lies *****This is quite a fictional write***** ====================================== Contest: Fanning the Embers of Catie Lindsey

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Date: 8/25/2014 9:57:00 PM
Dr. Ram This poem is making me hotter than the weather already has. I am blushing and need some cooling off. LOL Thank you for the sweet comment on my Hope And Faith poem.
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Date: 10/11/2010 10:45:00 PM
Hey Dr. Ram, just wanted to say thnx for leaving comments on my writes...I appreciate it.... Later, Jimmy
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:13:00 PM
I like this side of you my friend....perfect entry.....Michael
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:02:00 AM
7 as always! Phat- pretty hot and tempting! Love the politics! Thanks for commenting on my work!
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:36:00 AM
an interesting write, thanks for sending comments on my poem. take care
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:44:00 AM
Really enjoyed this Dr Ram, and thank you for the comments on my work.Ryan
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:05:00 PM
once again excellent works again dr thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/6/2010 4:47:00 PM
You get the 7 and I get... never mind. This is one of your best, I think and highly charged with eootic frisson. Regards from Gerard.
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:55:00 AM
aaaah.. this is like very HOT, you kind of surprised me, Dr, you sort of seem so dignified, I guess a man can be dignified and hot!!!! Best of luck..
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:32:00 AM
A steamy and wonderful write you have here, nice work...Raul
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:23:00 AM
This is seductively hot Dr Mehta ... good luck in the competition and thank you for your always kind comments on my poems love Jayne
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:11:00 PM
GOOD GRIEF, DR.RAM.now I know where you got your NAME. THIS IS very sexy. Best one yet! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:12:00 PM
To blush, to smile, at last I understood........ Thank you, Shar
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:04:00 PM
Steamy & Juicy Sonnet full of tender aggression ..... Nice read. Best Luck for Catie's contest. I Thank U for appreciative comments on my poetry. Luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:39:00 AM
A pleasure to read your amazing poetry today Dr. Ram. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be and the best in Catie's contest. I thank you so much for you kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 7:50:00 AM
Hi Dr Ram.Wow!Very hot and very sensuous writing.And the last line very true-although we do now have a brain-!Congratulations on your academic achievment.I am humbled in your presence.Opportunity never presented itself to me so I am self taught through reading.And I am grateful for the gift of empathy and the words I use to convey it.Thank you for your comments on my latest poem.Good luck with yours.Luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 10/5/2010 5:40:00 AM
love this ...its my type of poetry great lines ..ty for all my comments you make on my work ty again dear friend sarah x
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:02:00 PM
Mmmm....Mmmm....Wow! All I can say is double wow!!! Good luck in the contest. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:19:00 PM
Did you get too much celebration at the party?? Well party on!! Hope I can still be around as long as you!! And able to write poetry. (*u*)
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:37:00 PM
passion with grace - class. i liked this very much. emotionally descriptive. thank you, chuck
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:27:00 PM
Passionate Sonnet Dr. Ram. Good luck for Catie's contest ;)
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Date: 10/4/2010 2:32:00 PM
Spoken and witten like a true man Dr. Ram.. bravo for telling the truth in your lines..luv.. a great passionate entry for Catie .. I hope she is sitting down when reading this one.. a true winner my friend with luv...
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:52:00 PM
wow, you go Dr. Ram, very erotic, good luck in the contest with this steamy poem
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Date: 10/4/2010 12:59:00 PM
Passionate...Sara
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