Questionku One - Why

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1 oh beautiful poets sharing writes ~ why the mean hurtful words? 2 this butterfly wants to share thoughts ~ why crush my sweet beauty? 3 so I ask you knowing the ugly ~ why does beauty still soar? _____________________________ July 1, 2015 Questionku (3 lines, 4/5/6 - last line question)

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/1/2015 11:14:00 PM

Great questionkus here, Constance! I especially like the first one. Love, Kim

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/1/2015 4:59:00 PM

Broken Wings, Brilliant write here. Beauty still soars always over ugliness and meanness. That's why we as poets with our pens flow the ink and words of hope and love always in this troubled world. Enjoyed your Questionku. Excellent Work!! Best Wishes, Gary

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2015 12:46:00 PM

It still soars, my dear, because we won't let the "ugly" crush us!! Wonderful way to do Questionku!!

Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2015 12:52:00 PM

no we won't, the beautiful are entwined as "one" and we are strong

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/1/2015 12:28:00 PM

You wrote it so beautiful, BW. I enjoyed your questionkus. This is Richard's form. I'm sure he will be pleased.

Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2015 12:31:00 PM

oh I did not know that, amazing twist on haiku/senryu, what a poetic wonderful man, thanks for telling me Eileen

Constance La France

Date: 7/1/2015 12:27:00 PM

This is my first time writing Questionku, I quite like it and now I have written three . . .