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Quadruple Haiku-God Needs Our Presence

Wherever life breathes, love beautifies everything He has created! Waterfalls nourish what's lies underneath as ponds hold their fresh water! It's a Paradise we have lost since their first sin... let us take it back! God needs our presence, to walk with Him and obey... we can be holy!

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Sunflower Poetess

Date: 7/11/2011 2:59:00 PM

Andrew, Congratulations on your win in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Glenna

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 12:25:00 PM

Good one..Enjoyed this one..Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2011 10:36:00 PM

swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, andrew!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/9/2011 9:20:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS! so proud to share the placement with you....smile..*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 3:36:00 PM

Congrats Andrew on a fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Andrew in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 7/9/2011 11:18:00 AM

Congrats Andrew on your win with this wonderful write...enjoyed.

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2011 9:32:00 AM

Andrew, Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/9/2011 9:19:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Andrew

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2011 7:21:00 AM

let us take it back for sure Andrew.. excellent words of Haiku to express the message of faith and luv and hope .. impressive piece my friend full of spiritual expressions.. for life ..happy 4th to celebrate our freedom ...in Christ..luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 AM

WOW! a great quadruple haiku...congrats for this great work... ^_^ junjun