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Pseudo-Expressionless

pseudo-expression's of ragged diamonds a fugazi sans brilliance, shiner midst vague skies in the optical jags of practical indifference

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/14/2016 6:59:00 PM
Love this poem, Paloma. It has such a neo-Harlem Ren post-cool vibe to it. You for sure coulda ran w/my father's set of poetic contemporaries. People I learned my craft under their feet. You got the gift for sure. Love always from the RW.
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:08:00 AM
fuzzy wuzzy wuz//my brainz all abuzz//fugazi?//soundz like Ozzie//ozzie iz az Ozzie doez. Pyro - many thanks for the new word, I'll upgrade from fubar! ~ j
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Date: 10/12/2016 12:20:00 AM
Big words for my small brain, will need a small explanation so I can marvel , I am so limited when it comes to abstracts....like it a lot tho....it's good strong words......Ian x
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Date: 10/12/2016 8:08:00 AM
It's about indifference and phonies, actually I just wanted to use the word fugazi in a poem. :)
Date: 10/9/2016 5:55:00 PM
This one is deep. Great write.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Maurice.

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