Ps Sequence-Trapped

In the body looking out- what do we see stars or bars

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/27/2009 11:43:00 PM

I see beautiful stars, lovely write Brian...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/25/2009 8:19:00 AM

Hopefully more stars than bars....excellent question to ponder!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/25/2009 7:12:00 AM

I love this thought provoking write, Brian. For me, it is stars when I am not depressed and bars when I am. Stars are nicer than bars. Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/25/2009 7:02:00 AM

Well, the comments are just as powerful as the poem. And thanks for the comic relief Sean! So heavy duty Brian, a very good question, and I must agree what we see certainly depends just where on our journey we are. Awesome writing. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/25/2009 5:19:00 AM

I agree 100% with L'nass. But first, in order to see stars, we must experience and see our bars - no other way. love this Brian, truth. love, Kristin

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/25/2009 2:45:00 AM

I got a thump , in Murphy's Lounge . Then I saw stars in bars !! ... Seriously , Brian , this is a seriously , well presented , epigram which can relate to our many quests , in life ....

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/25/2009 2:06:00 AM

The answer depends on where we are. Deft write, man, Love

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 1:52:00 AM

I've seen the stars behind bars before, not a pleasant sight.