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Promise The Moon - Revised

                                              When I say "I love you",
                                          Should it come with a price?
                                           To say I'm thinking of you,
                                         Are these words still unwise?

                                      I could fall for you a dozen times,
                                      And have the wrong words to say.
                                      Just tell me that I'm on you mind,
                                            At least I hope and pray.

                                       I've seen sunsets and sunrises
                                   And have spent so much time alone
                                        Should love wear no disguises 
                                         That I may call you my own.

                                          If I could have one chance,
                                         One moment to be with you,
                                  In love's fell clutch of gripping hands
                                         I wish to promise the moon.

                                                 ©2013 Honestly JT

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  1. Date: 2/9/2015 12:59:00 PM
    JT, A thoughtful and romantic poem, very well penned. Well Done! G.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:35:00 PM
    As a moonlover yor poem title is winsome to me. And d whole poem is super in rhymin sentiments. She oughtta b pleasd. Thnx for letin me know of my win.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:49:00 AM
    this is lovely!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:20:00 AM
    Invest words with care. Open to gain or pain.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Hauntingly beautiful, P.J. I think I have to mark this as a fav :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 3:58:00 PM
    Justice, I must say. In my opinion, this is the most beautiful of all your poems. So beautiful and dreamy. Absolutely lovely!