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Procrastination

P 
   E 
      N 
         D 
            U 
               L  
                  U
	     M
	        S
                      Pause 
           To protest, paradigms of         
       Patterned positions, pathways           
   Pegged precise. Postpone the push 
 And pull of passion prostrate, to push
 And pull in planned pulses...  in preset  
Partial pirouettes,purloin the progress of         
 Premeditated peace. Pressing, pacing,   
    Perspiring,to purchase a panacea         
         Of prisoners… The present           
                   Passes-Past.
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Beata Agustin Date: 12/13/2024 12:00:00 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/21/2016 10:00:00 PM Ryan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/15/2016 8:34:00 PM Ryan, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT ** Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/20/2009 1:59:00 PM another wonder! Light & Love pump kin ;) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/5/2009 5:11:00 AM Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured Ryan. Love Carol Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/4/2009 4:40:00 PM Excellent poem, and perfect form...well deserved to be among the winning finals! Congratulations!!~ Carrie Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 1/4/2009 9:52:00 AM Ryan - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 1/4/2009 6:45:00 AM Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar Login to Reply

John Heck Date: 11/30/2008 4:21:00 AM Ryan = Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 11/11/2008 9:15:00 AM Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 11/1/2008 4:36:00 PM Paul - Outstanding - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/28/2008 7:23:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 10/27/2008 3:45:00 PM Hi Ryan Paul Very clever and witty. Congrats on your wonderful poetic write making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 7/25/2008 8:53:00 AM This is a very creative piece, Ryan Paul .:) I love how you employed the letter 'P' to project the imagery. Great beginning and clever end. I believe that I'm one of these 'procrastinators'. :( Not so much fun. Often I will overcome this with spontaneity. This doesn't always work either. :) I'm procrastinating at the moment, I'd better go and get some stuff finished up...sighhh Best to you...God bless you and yours...Mikki .:) Login to Reply

Cayetano Young Date: 7/17/2008 6:20:00 PM Cleverly written Sir. i'm looking forward to see this in winners list in the next poetry soup contest. hope you can comment more in my poetry. with much respect and adoration, GiNoLoCo,18,Philippines (*note: asL?) (*chuckles) Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 7/14/2008 8:18:00 AM Very ingenious poem - great job Login to Reply