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Procrastination

P E N D U L U M S Pause To protest, paradigms of Patterned positions, pathways Pegged precise. Postpone the push And pull of passion prostrate, to push And pull in planned pulses... in preset Partial pirouettes,purloin the progress of Premeditated peace. Pressing, pacing, Perspiring,to purchase a panacea Of prisoners… The present Passes-Past. .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/21/2016 10:00:00 PM
Ryan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:34:00 PM
Ryan, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 11/20/2009 1:59:00 PM
another wonder! Light & Love pump kin ;)
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Date: 1/5/2009 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured Ryan. Love Carol
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Date: 1/4/2009 4:40:00 PM
Excellent poem, and perfect form...well deserved to be among the winning finals! Congratulations!!~ Carrie
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Date: 1/4/2009 9:52:00 AM
Ryan - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/4/2009 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:21:00 AM
Ryan = Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:36:00 PM
Paul - Outstanding - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:45:00 PM
Hi Ryan Paul Very clever and witty. Congrats on your wonderful poetic write making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/25/2008 8:53:00 AM
This is a very creative piece, Ryan Paul .:) I love how you employed the letter 'P' to project the imagery. Great beginning and clever end. I believe that I'm one of these 'procrastinators'. :( Not so much fun. Often I will overcome this with spontaneity. This doesn't always work either. :) I'm procrastinating at the moment, I'd better go and get some stuff finished up...sighhh Best to you...God bless you and yours...Mikki .:)
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Date: 7/17/2008 6:20:00 PM
Cleverly written Sir. i'm looking forward to see this in winners list in the next poetry soup contest. hope you can comment more in my poetry. with much respect and adoration, GiNoLoCo,18,Philippines (*note: asL?) (*chuckles)
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Date: 7/14/2008 8:18:00 AM
Very ingenious poem - great job
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