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Prison Non-Stop

never ending walls
No opening to escape
claw marks on the brick

infinite walking
excercise for the sinners
we're carving out hell

three guards stand watching
mocking the lame sufferers
spitting at our feet

This is for Abe Lopez's Van Gogh's Van Goghs
Title of painting: The Convict Prison
Artist: Vincent Van Gogh

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  1. Date: 10/11/2009 12:17:00 PM
    Interesting write here, Savannah. Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest! I'm not familiar with this painting but you have peeked my curiosity to go look it up ... smile ...

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 12:46:00 PM
    Wow! I really love this. Very clear description of what a prisoner goes through, innocent or guilty. Congratulations on a well deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 11:33:00 AM
    Congratulations, Savannah!! Excellent wonder why it's one of the winners! : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 10:12:00 AM
    Well done Savannah in your fourth placing in Abe's contest, lovely poem >> James

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 10:01:00 AM
    An excellent poem. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 9:06:00 AM
    I wasnt familiar with this described it perfectly. Congrats on your fine win. BG

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 7:56:00 AM
    Wow Savannah! You captured the feeling of this prison, and the misery! Well done, congratulations on this winner! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 3:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest Savannah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 11:51:00 PM
    Dear Savannah, Congratulations on your well deserved win in Abe's contest. Fantastic writing! Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 8:24:00 PM
    Savannah, congrats on your success in Abe's contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:03:00 PM
    Interesting work describinb Van Gogh. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara