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She painted cubes and angles drowned in hues of density and celsius pressures, it was in part due to her retrospect of comfortable sorrow, the syndrome was complicated by the distant shine of a brilliant lover, I remember her voice coming to to me like that of a summer solstice eagerly carressed by the lungs of the bluejays that would translate the technique of blossoms like it were their first language, her fury was lush, and she channeled it properly, I'm positive shes negative in an act thats sincere, she is positively negatively painting in gray today - J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/14/2014 2:00:00 PM
What a fascinating write....ahhhh...women. Emotional lot....so many hues....those two last lines....fascinating
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/14/2014 8:21:00 PM
Judging women just doesn't work when their in the grey Eileen. Mans' greatest rival. Those final lines do evoke a lot my friend. J.A.B.
Date: 10/28/2013 5:25:00 PM
You never know what mood you're going to get. Gray moods much easier to handle than fickle black or red. I'm sure she appreciates your ability to swiftly adjust :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 2:18:00 PM
Adjusting is a matter of survival my friend - there is something smooth about grey Karen - thanks for purusing my archives - J.A.B. %
Date: 11/13/2012 4:12:00 PM
Just when you think you understand a woman, it will fall apart. Some of us are the enigma that must be subdued and the ride is sometimes bewildering but the highs a lows are not to be missed. Your depiction of a woman has it's own fascination Justin; worth knowing I'd say! Love, Elizabeth
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/13/2012 9:54:00 PM
I can rely on you to understand my substance Elizabeth - I adore the lows as much as the highs, but only because of hope - thanks so much for the love - J.A.B. %
Date: 11/4/2012 6:06:00 AM
That's one way to describe it, Justin..."positively negatively painting in gray today"! I'm watching outside as I write this thinking that even Mother Nature must have this "syndrome". The sky is brooding and grey, it's cold and stray flakes are starting to fall. Keep well! Love, Mikki
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/4/2012 1:53:00 PM
Sounds like an august overcast Mikki - I wish we had some snow over here, but all good things to those who respect patience - glad you enjoyed the word play in this write my lovely friend - J.A.B. %
Date: 10/31/2012 2:54:00 PM
very interesting one of a woman you have known!! I enjoyed the read! and thanks what you had to say about trees. How cool that you would like to be one!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/1/2012 10:00:00 PM
I like pleasing you very much Andrea - women are strange - J.A.B. %
Date: 10/26/2012 8:32:00 PM
Hola, Justin!!! wow..on the emotions.... watch out for this cycle.... you would not like me on my negetive days.. LOL... I stay away from ME" and drown my hues too... , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, Good night*PD
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/27/2012 11:40:00 PM
Mucho felice PD., I love your candor here - perhaps thats the test of frienship, survivning the rough while preserving an enthussiasm for the potential for positive meetings - thanks my friend - J.A.B. %
Date: 10/20/2012 3:43:00 PM
Hey Jab...I can't believe you would dare to venture down that road...most men would be petrified to even go there. commendation to the max my friend. Tnx for visiting. One love. Joy Wells
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/21/2012 12:06:00 AM
I thank you for the 'Props' Joy - I must understand women in order to comprehend life, and the amazing biology of women is terrifying & enchanting, so writing about the magic of women is a mandate from the Divine - J.A.B. %
Date: 10/16/2012 6:03:00 PM
so many great words combined in unique ways. Love it.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/17/2012 1:56:00 PM
This piece is about accepting the value of melancholoy, and reemerging with the positive divine Joann - I thank you for the compliments - J.A.B. %
Date: 10/14/2012 11:02:00 PM
WHOAHSERS.... Not only do I love this poem, but it is favorited. I latched onto every word -haha. I was almost drowned by this piece...uh...in a good way, if there's such thing? LOVELY piece. Always~Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2012 8:59:00 AM
You are such a gothic vixen Laura - this poem is a microcosm of your brilliance - thanks for the unremitting love - J.A.B. %

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