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Precious Moments

A little girl knelt, beside her broken dolly, while a white kitten licked tears. "Oh, Snowball Kitty, what can we do for Dolly!" ________________________ January 19, 2013 Poetry/Tanka/Precious Moments Copyright Protected, ID 01-450-663-19 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/31/2013 4:05:00 PM

A beautiful poem. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2013 3:36:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/31/2013 10:15:00 AM

congratulations on your win,Constance....cute and sad at the same time...loved it...thanks for sharing and enlightening soupers with your poetry..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2013 10:12:00 PM

this is really cute, Constance, I am proud to share the HM with you! congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2013 10:12:00 PM

hope you are not snowed in like I sometimes am down here in utah!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2013 9:19:00 PM

Hello Constance.. Congratulations in Nathans, precious moment contest...xox~PD

Nathan D.

Date: 1/30/2013 8:01:00 PM

Constance, thanks for the Precious poem' Nate

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2013 5:57:00 PM

love this beauty, my friend - another sure winner

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/20/2013 2:05:00 AM

Good images conveyed here Constance; hoping you are well, Joe..)

Rick Parise

Date: 1/19/2013 4:31:00 PM

Very Cute!!!!Enjoyed the imagery!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/19/2013 2:37:00 PM

Awwww, poor girl! You have dived right into our emotions and brought out caring, tenderness, sadness, and compassion! You have painted them within this very poem, a very special write I must say my friend! You write of kindness Constance, maybe the kitty can help her fix the doll! This is a fabulous piece, Great Work!!