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Praying For Rain -Chris D Aechtner-

Praying For Rain (collaboration with-Chris D. Aechtner) by~ CHRIS D. AECHTNER: She resembles a ghost from the past, and I wonder how long she will last? There is no turning back- cannot turn my back on her now. Watching the sea slowly reclaim this pearl, I can see just a hint of the girl, shimmering beneath a film of sickness. She still smiles through a frown of pain, strengthening my resolve to see this through, to make sure we both equally gain. And when the waves finally pull her away, pull out her dying breath, will she transform back into rain? She leans on me, light as a feather. So light and fragile. There is no turning back- cannot turn my back on her now. Watching the sea slowly reclaim this pearl, I can see just a hint of the girl, shimmering beneath a veil of sickness. Hold her hand, hand her back a smile, I am praying for rain, praying for rain. *** by~ POET D: Feel her peace, Listen for her voice, I am praying for rain, praying for rain. My dreams will always wonder in her field of rain. A journey withered under the wavy seas. There is no turning back- cannot turn my back on her now. Watching the sea slowly reclaim this pearl, I can see just a hint of the girl, shimmering beneath a veil of sickness. Light as a feather, I fell her Autumn sun, I feel her presence, her sickness is gone, upon my face I feel the moonlight rain. At last she is leaving behind these wiping tears. Her rain-less eyes now open the seas and skies, pouring her jewels of purity in to my heart. There is no turning back- cannot turn my back on her now. Watching the sea slowly reclaim this pearl, I can see just a hint of the girl, shimmering beneath a veil of sickness. She is the ghost from my past and I pray for this essence of her rain to last. A Collaboration with *Chris D. Aechtner ~MY COLLABORATION CONTEST~

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Date: 2/4/2016 10:59:00 PM
pray for spam **SKAT**
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Date: 8/4/2013 1:37:00 AM
gosh, I finally found one I had never seen!! PD, I think I told you before. You are like a chameleon. Able to conform to the style of other poets. You did wonderfully with this collab from long ago!!
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Date: 11/16/2012 8:39:00 AM
OK i've found this, and i find a collaboration with CDA,,, well all i can say PD, this just blows me away, two of the most respected poets on the planet, and i love you both..,.....
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Date: 7/28/2012 3:11:00 PM
I chose this one at random and am very glad I did - you and Chris worked well together, PD. Hope you're having a great weekend, my friend
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:17:00 AM
enjoyable
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:12:00 AM
a wow wonder ..both of u excelled on this piece PD my BFF... the competition will be fierce after seeing all these entries luv..good luck to Chris and u..he is unique and so are u luv.. your BFF for life..
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Date: 8/2/2011 7:21:00 AM
Very imaginative and lyrical. The two parts combine seamlessly. Well done! xoxo, Robert.
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Date: 7/23/2011 9:04:00 PM
so beautiful!! great work you two!! Thanks for your comments on my poems.!!
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:46:00 PM
You did a super job on this wonderful verse. The subject is so appropriate in this awful heat wave. Loved the ending!
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Date: 7/22/2011 7:52:00 AM
Wow, pd! you sure said it right-- I think you did an awesome job here :) I really like how your collab with Chris worked out-- way to go that you worked on your part so that it flowed seamlessly with Chris' part --you sure ended this beautifully, amazing work! You sure are doing great with these collabs, :D so happy for you that you thought of this ;)-- ok I'm sorta jealous now, haha :p!
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:27:00 PM
I hope Chris, does not think I could not follow.... it was fun,, and very interesting.. I have never done an awesome poem like this before.. thanks for this Chris, D.... I think i enjoyed coming up with this better, than a slam...lol.
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:24:00 PM
this was wonderfully penned nice job! cory
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Date: 7/21/2011 8:28:00 PM
thank you Cory,..p.d.

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