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Prancing Pony

She rides a horse 'pon the merry-go-round The decorated carousel endorse Memories of long ago now astound She rides a horse Carousel music wind up tinkling sound Sights, scents, food all pleasures reinforce One enjoyable night forever now renowed Long ago, short time together, love's course In my aged mind those happy times rehearse 'Pon the carousel round and round and round She rides a horse I don't remember what form that this was... Just guessing Rondeau..

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Date: 12/31/2013 7:14:00 PM
This brought back many good memories for me. Because, when I was a kid, my Mom would take me to the county fair every summer. And, I always had to ride on the carousel, at least once! I loved this poem, Sara, terrific work!...Thank you very much for your kind visit. And, I hope that you have a Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/29/2013 1:34:00 PM
It sounded like a great type whatever it was i enjoyed it alot my friend, and thanks for your comments on my work. cheri take care, stay safe and warm dear one
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Date: 12/28/2013 8:33:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poetry. Yes some memories we are glad to have dimmed but not the way home [sigh] Light & Love
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Date: 12/27/2013 12:02:00 AM
Aw, this is sweet and cute.. Reminds of my daughter's birthday trip. We went to the zoo, and there she went round and round, had fun, riding a pony, and the carousel..... Sending hugs and love... LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2013 9:16:00 PM
Beautiful Sara....
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Date: 12/25/2013 6:47:00 PM
Merry Christmas . Sara.
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Date: 12/25/2013 1:13:00 AM
At first I thought it was rondeau and then I realized it must be Rondel because it is shorter than rondeau!! Wanted to say again a very Merry Xmas to you, dear. And I got your nice card.
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Date: 12/24/2013 2:33:00 PM
Reminds me of happy times at amusement parks. Nearby where I used to live was the fabled Coney Island. Just got back to the good old U.S A. after 2 weeks in the land of Israel. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/24/2013 2:05:00 PM
beautifully crafted piece to you and your family have a beautiful love filled christmas and a joyful new year
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Date: 12/24/2013 10:10:00 AM
Sweet Memories are always our best friend Sara. Very sweet Poem to recollect those wonderful moments of joy and happiness. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2014 . May God bless you with all the wonders of Happiness Love and best wishes always..Ravindra
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful! Sara! Merry XMAS to you and Doris! Love, jimbo
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Date: 12/24/2013 7:14:00 AM
A pleasant writing that reflects the times! Merry Christmas, dear Sara!
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Date: 12/24/2013 7:10:00 AM
This is a lovely write my kind friend! I really, very much, enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a remarkable piece Sara! Great Work!!
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