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A pair of tiny orphans in haystacks their mother made, near an orchard by a lake, with pine tall as an arcade. Sheltering them,I brought milk to the lonely kits each day, but they wouldn't show their faces till I hovered far away. In time they learned to like me, and slowly joined running games; one brown-furred, one white bundle Sugar and Puff... their nicknames. Hearing my voice from the door, the kitties would run so quick right up my tummy to the neck; playing cuddle- and- frolic. They hopped about the garden wearing blooms like a shawl, and I seemed content to ride my pets till break of nightfall. One day, Puff and Sugar left not marking sign of contacts... the fun of souls well relished, how my heart misses loved cats. ------------ I Love My Pets! Laura Loo's Contest 1/25/2016

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Date: 1/31/2016 11:08:00 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on your sweet Pet win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:37:00 PM
What a delightful write nette..Congrats on big win!!
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:56:00 AM
NETTE, CONGRATS ON YOUR LOVELY PET WIN. LOVE ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 8:42:00 AM
Congrats Nette, how nostalgic I feel about my little birdie after reading this poem.
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Date: 1/26/2016 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sweet, touching poem. Janice
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:44:00 AM
So very sweet, Nette. I adore cats too. Congratulations on your nice win. hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:32:00 PM
Very well penned, Nette...congratulations.
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:47:00 PM
Great write, Nette! Congrats.
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Date: 1/25/2016 3:50:00 PM
Oh Nette, so touching and lovable..Thank you for being a part of my contest. So sweet how you took care of them..Love that, so sweet ..*smiles* -luloo
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Date: 11/20/2014 5:39:00 PM
love your moral Nette superb poem congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:25:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your top win for this adorable, well-written tale with a nice moral. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:24:00 PM
How cute Nette ! love that tale, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:58:00 PM
Really cute story, Nette. Hope the coyotes didn't get them.
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:38:00 PM
Great moral, congratulations Nette!
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:26:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win Nette. A very important message here. Cherish the moments while you can.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:48:00 AM
A little sad but an important moral. Cherish every moment you have with those you love. Congratulations on your first place win, you didn't horse around you really went for it.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement, Nette! Enjoyed the relationship between pony and kittens, and your moral is worthy of being observed. // paul
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:30:00 AM
Nice Story Nette and the lesson is clear,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:42:00 AM
This is such a sweet tale! I can just picture the pony racing along with two tiny kittens clinging to her back.
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:51:00 AM
Yes a story to ponder over. Time flits. I am sorry about the separation. I think Puff and Sugar are pretty strong to explore their world. Love netteXXXXXrajat
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Date: 11/10/2014 10:38:00 PM
I love the moral nette...too many times we take our loved ones for granted...hugs Tim
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Date: 11/10/2014 4:16:00 PM
Nette you wear many different hats.Now excelling in children stories! Love it, and the moral is wow. by the way, I want to make sure of something. Do our entries in your contest have to bear the title of the contest. Or can we use a related title if it makes more sense for our poem? Please just answer me in soupmail if I need to change my title; otherwise I will keep how it is. Thanks, dearie.
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Date: 11/10/2014 1:53:00 PM
Oh nette... this is so sweet! :) very well written... I almost giggle like a kid! ^_^ i miss you.. oxox
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Date: 11/10/2014 12:29:00 PM
Nette, this literary gem pulls kids from 8 to 80. What happened to the kittens? There's got to be a part 2. Faving this!
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