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Ponies Trampling Snorted Dreams -

Where no ponies free ranged, I dreamt to break and wrangle paints. Where ponies bent, broke and bridled, I dreamt to hang away my spurs. Where no ponies free range, I have no spurs and wrangle paints.

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Date: 8/16/2015 12:25:00 AM
Mark, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
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Date: 8/14/2015 1:07:00 AM
Very clever
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Date: 8/13/2015 6:44:00 PM
I love this places me in the pasture with the herd
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Date: 4/18/2015 10:58:00 PM
the title goes really well with this most interesting sijo!
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Date: 4/17/2015 9:24:00 AM
These beautiful words are truly meaningful, only I don't know what they mean. I enjoyed the confusion. Great write!
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Mark Ackerson
Date: 4/17/2015 9:42:00 AM
Thanks, Anna. Perhaps if I were to use the first letter of each word in the title, it would help a bit in understanding...

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