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Poetic Lovechild

Intertwining our words. Our thoughts lay between sheets. Conscience climaxes ; your wisdom erupts within me. Absorbing your awareness, I conceive your insight. Impregnating my understanding with your brilliant mind. Growing inside my thoughts are the visions we share. I bare the lovechild of our poetic love affair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/26/2012 12:19:00 PM
nice work.....friend
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:50:00 PM
Another superb write. You have such a delightful touch I love poems soooo much....xoxoxoxo
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:50:00 PM
Another superb write. You have such a delightful touch I love poems soooo much....xoxoxoxo
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:39:00 AM
Smile ˜ I Really Love Your Beautiful Passion, My Dear Amazing & Beautiful Chiquita * One Thing I Take From This Treasure In Faves, Amid Its Brilliance, I Find What Once More What I Have Known For Awhile Now ˜ How In That Ones Words Can Penetrate Unto The Deepest Of Soul * Your Beauty, Beauties, Are Very Beautiful * My Love, Forever, John!:) ˜
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Date: 10/15/2011 9:34:00 AM
SomebodyZ been gettin' some BOO-TA-HaYY lately...and it's EVIDENT by the words comin' off your fingers kid! :) Keep breakin' Pavement!
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Date: 10/10/2011 9:34:00 AM
Great Baity.......
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Date: 10/9/2011 12:58:00 AM
C.B., I FELL IN LOVE WITH A POET... AND THE LOVE AFFAIR IS THE BEST LOVE I HAVE EVER HAD... LOL... I MET HIM HERE ON THE SOUP.... AND BELIEVE ME HE WOOOED ME WITH POETRY... BUT, NOPE NO LOVE CHILD,,,, GREAT POEM,..P.D.
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Date: 10/9/2011 12:23:00 AM
Cool, very cool, I really enjoyed this clever of a write! I love the link between the two of you and an implied child! Awesome poem Chiquita!!
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