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Poetic Love -Creative Layout

We have never met across the oceans blue I know that I am the one you write about Your romantic words are sheer perfection I drink in every syllable My heart s k p s a beat i How can I tell you I’m F A L L I N G In love with you I can no longer control my emotions; If you could look at my heart you would see it is B R E A K I N G Just word from you and I will be by your side…. WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU ARE HAPPILY MARRIED AND THEY ARE WRITTEN ABOUT YOUR WIFE! I simply don’t understand … Jan Allison 10~24~15 For the contest Creative Layouts Sponsor Broken Wings

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Bill Lindsay

Date: 10/28/2015 10:55:00 AM

Wonderfully done, Jan ... proud to be on the same page as you x

Jan Allison
Date: 10/28/2015 11:03:00 AM

Aww Bill the feeling is mutual I read some stunning creative poems:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 10/27/2015 9:37:00 PM

Jan, Wonderful win. SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 10/28/2015 7:42:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/26/2015 8:45:00 PM

I see from the comments below that you won! Congrats - this is creative and clever. I enjoyed it LOTS ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 2:21:00 AM

Yes I got a first - was delighted:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/26/2015 7:43:00 PM

Very creative Jan and the story can either make us wince or smile - congrats - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2015 2:21:00 AM

Exactly Lindsay and you see it happening on here:-( hugs jan xx

Arlene Smith

Date: 10/26/2015 10:01:00 AM

Been there done that lol!... Congrats on your great win, sweetness!...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 12:49:00 PM

Thanks Arlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/26/2015 8:25:00 AM

This is sweet Jan and you have layed it out so creatively. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! I am happy to be in your talented company. Cheers, Connie

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie i saw some lovely creative entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/26/2015 4:28:00 AM

Jan, emotive with a nice twist and creative in the way you arrange the letters.. =`)~Olive Eloisa

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 8:56:00 AM

Thanks Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/26/2015 1:04:00 AM

Congrats on superb win Jan with this wonderful creative layout and poetry!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 2:08:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman

Date: 10/25/2015 7:38:00 PM

I knew my sinking feeling was correct, congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 2:08:00 AM

You were correct - thanks Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/25/2015 7:10:00 PM

Excellent creative layout with a nice twist in your poem, Jan! Congratulations on your fine well-deserved win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 2:07:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/25/2015 6:33:00 PM

Congratulations on you wonderful win, I love the poem!!!!! hugs eve

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 6:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve I have seen some wonderful creative poems and really enjoyed reading the winners:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:51:00 PM

way to GO, this one is super well deserved. BIG congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 5:54:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I had fun with this contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman

Date: 10/25/2015 5:02:00 PM

Ha! Jan, I love it. So serious and sweet until the last lines.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 5:03:00 PM

Thanks James i had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/25/2015 3:15:00 PM

I love the last lines about the wife, Jan. You must think "outside the box" all the time.lol Kudos on this beauty!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 3:18:00 PM

I never know what my muse will come out with Dan - having never written a poem since I was at school I think I'm making up for lost time in the last 20 months lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/25/2015 1:21:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 2:40:00 PM

Many thanks:-) Hugs jan xx:-)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/25/2015 12:17:00 PM

Oh dear!! jumping to conclusions!! How often we read the signs wrong!! Very witty and creative, Jan. Congratulations on being placed first:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 12:22:00 PM

Sadly sometimes we do Paul! :-) hugs Jan xx

Donna Jones

Date: 10/24/2015 10:09:00 PM

Aah clever!...wonderful presentation..good luck...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 7:44:00 AM

Thanks Donna I enjoyed the challenge - have seen some lovely poems I think the sponsor will have fun judging this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/24/2015 3:22:00 PM

Jan, this is such a clever and creative write! I enjoyed the twist at the end. You should place well in the contest. Good luck in contest:-) Alexis 7

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 3:30:00 PM

Thanks Alexis - just a bit of creative fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman

Date: 10/24/2015 2:57:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, I have a S I N K I N G feeling you have a winner here.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 3:29:00 PM

I don't think you can format the comments at all - it is hard enough to do it in the poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman
Date: 10/24/2015 3:14:00 PM

Lol I typed out sinking diagonally to TRY and be creative but it just capitalized it. Can't figure it out

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 2:59:00 PM

LOL Greg - I will wait and see - a win is a bonus but as long as I get reads and comments that is the most important thing:-) Hugs jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 10/24/2015 10:49:00 AM

and that is why I don't do married women....because it will forever leave me slipping....and slipping is what I refuse to do....all because there are so many sexy single women like you....I Love this jan....;)

Eric Boddie
Date: 10/24/2015 11:20:00 AM

I mean single women who think like you....single women with Beautiful hearts....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 11:10:00 AM

ha ha ha well I've never hidden the fact I'm married ... so the final comment definitely doesn't relate to me :-) hugs jan xx

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 10/24/2015 10:38:00 AM

Very creative indeed Jan, loved it. Best to you in the contest.~ Caryl

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 10:49:00 AM

Thanks Caryl:-) I have seen some lovely 'creations' :-) hugs jan xx

Paige Clinton

Date: 10/24/2015 10:23:00 AM

Wow! I really enjoyed it! I hope you get one of the top places! It was amazing! Wishing you the best of luck!-Paige P.S: I just realized we entered the same contest! That's amazing! Mine is called Dear Anna, a really old one I wrote! I hope you like it! :) :) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 10:27:00 AM

Will drop by and read it Paige:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/24/2015 9:13:00 AM

Wonderful Jan....sounds like the theme of the day.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2015 8:47:00 AM

hahahaha. LOVE the creativity!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 8:48:00 AM

Thought out of the box lol :-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 10/24/2015 8:40:00 AM

Jan ~ I don't know whether to laugh or cry over this one. Your confession of love is so sweet, then you yelled at him for finding out he has a wife! Did he mislead you? In either case...It's a very emotional write.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/24/2015 8:53:00 AM

25 years...that's something to celebrate!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2015 8:45:00 AM

ha ha total fiction my friend I was just being ultra creative lol - I will be celebrating my silver anniversary next June ! Hugs Jan xx