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there is one river, boundless that I long to swim at length a-flowing dark and magical with prurience and strength and if those churning waters are the stead of my demise ‘tis nowhere else I'd rather drown ... than deep there … in your eyes. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Sponsor.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 10:30:00 AM

Just gorgeous, Gregory and one of my favorites on the list! (I did eyes too)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/16/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2018 2:06:00 AM

A beautiful poem, Gregory, especially the final line which appeals to my style of writing!! Congratulations on a merited podium finish. Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/16/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul, I'm pleased you enjoyed it! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2018 8:58:00 PM

Wonderful write, Greg !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:42:00 PM

That's very sweet of you, Eve - thank you so much! Blessings! :-) <3

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/13/2018 2:42:00 PM

Ah you did it again. Swoonworthy! Congratulations on your win with this yummy piece of poetry :) xomo! <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:42:00 PM

Thank you very much, Mo - that's very kind of you! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/13/2018 10:16:00 AM

My favorite BARDen, you have given new meaning to the word 'drowned' --- poetic meaning, positive and purposeful. Kudos on your placement in the contest too! Best always, Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:41:00 PM

Ah, so very kind of you, my friend - many thanks and blessings for your wonderful comments, as always! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2018 7:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:40:00 PM

Many kind thanks to you, Anne-Lise - blessings, friend! :-) <3

Silent One

Date: 6/13/2018 7:18:00 AM

Now that sounds like a great place to drown in... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:40:00 PM

Thank you very much, Silent One - much appreciated.

Carole Duet

Date: 6/12/2018 7:49:00 PM

I love this, Gregory. That last line was incredible and beautiful! GL in the contest though I doubt you need it.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:40:00 PM

That's very sweet of you, Carole - thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/12/2018 11:03:00 AM

Beautiful, Greg! I vaguely remember being in love. It seemed to me she was always looking right through me:)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:39:00 PM

Thank you very much, Dan - yes, that's a very good description of it ... a feeling I vaguely remember as well. Blessings, My Friend! :-)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/12/2018 10:37:00 AM

"Simply" beautiful!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, SW! :-) <3

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/12/2018 10:31:00 AM

Very sweet and beautiful. Good luck!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dale ... congrats on your 1st in Brian's contest! (I didn't place in that one) Blessings, my friend! :-)