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plucking grapes along the lane

my sisters and I plucking grapes along the lane. . . the chatter of birds my sisters and I plucking grapes along the lane. . . the sun sets purple my sisters and I plucking grapes along the lane. . . mom’s call to supper For the "Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes" Free Poetry Contest of Alfred Vasallo

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  1. Date: 5/16/2015 11:41:00 AM
    you are a good haiku-ist Andrea

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 10:39:00 AM
    Love the poem , I was once sat in a tavern in Cyprus , Not far from Aphrodite's beach When the owner said , Help yourself to grapes . I looked at him as if he had forgotten to put the grapes out , Above your head he pointed. there were grape vines all around the place and I'd gone there every night for two weeks and not noticed , Too busy watching the Greek dancers

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Nice series of haiku. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 6:29:00 AM
    I love haiku because is synthetic although not simple. This one is impressive. My sincere compliments

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 1:40:00 PM
    The line 'plucking grapes along the lane' makes me feel so at ease and summery. Way to go, Andrea. Lovely. -Jeremy

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Shades of Mogen David! Good stuff, Andrea. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 3:17:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always valued..Sara

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:39:00 AM
    you are very good at this form. I don't know why it is so difficult for me. This will do very well.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:30:00 PM
    You are quite "purple" these days! It's very lighthearted and I know when I as younger at my grandma's place, I would spend a tremendous amount of time picking fruit. It never got old :) Best of luck!

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 1:51:00 PM
    And the winner is: Dandy Andie! (appause, whistles) Another 'juicy' gem my friend and I assume you plucked only well ripened ones and no 'sour' grapes?...I will stop this nonsense now

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 5/7/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And I'm quite certain this is getting on your nerves, but PLEASE don't subject me to your 'Grapes of Wrath' (Help me I can't stop)
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:56:00 AM
    Hidden beauty of grapes adorned with the sequence of love. Thanks......, Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 10:18:00 AM
    A paridisal picture of perfection. With Mothers day approaching, makes a nice tribute. Hope you have a wonderful one. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:47:00 AM
    Very nice. I especially like the repeats with different cutting line for each haiku. They are simple yet evocative. It should do well in the contest. Jack

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Love the image! It reminds me of my bothers and I picking dewberries on the fencerow.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 2:33:00 AM
    Nice imagery! Like it :)

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 3:20:00 PM
    Now this is what I call a plucky little poem lol. it's going into my faves this one is. I just love that line, 'Plucking grapes along the lane', A mood swing line for me. Lovely poem as well. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Best wishes Andrea~A.O

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:18:00 AM
    Andrea nicely done for this contest. Sweet grapes don't they smell delicious. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on mine. Hugs and smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 11:31:00 PM
    A sweet entry Andrea. My laprop keeps freezing. Sure hope kaspersky can fix it.

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 10:43:00 PM
    Hmm..a 'fruitful' contest entry for you I hope Andrea, I liked the family aspect.. good one; Joe..)