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Please Come Home

Lonely nights without you My teardrops fall On soft moist honey lips I hear anew The gentle echoes of Your footsteps call Faintly from a distance Love I miss you! 08/20/15

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Kp Nunez

Date: 8/22/2015 12:16:00 PM

Very very good verso, James. You may wish to check "echoes". All the best in the contest. hugs!

James Inman
Date: 8/22/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim. As many times as I read this you would think I would have noticed, relying too much on spell check. Thank you for the nice comment as well.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/20/2015 6:35:00 PM

A lovely and well written piece, I like your description. Excellence...........A.M.

James Inman
Date: 8/20/2015 6:59:00 PM

Thanks Afolabi. Stopping by your sight again soon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2015 4:08:00 PM

Oh, cool, you went happy and I went tragic (mine not yet posted). I really like this. I would read your long poem but I am already late to get home, so I need to leave RIGHT now. You are my final comment of this afternoon. HOpe to see this other poem of yours soon!

James Inman
Date: 8/20/2015 6:56:00 PM

Can't wait to read yours

Constance La France

Date: 8/20/2015 1:16:00 PM

James, beautifully penned poem for the contest A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tangerine

James Inman
Date: 8/20/2015 1:41:00 PM

Thanks, BW. The next time you visit, I would love to get your thoughts on Dark Reflection. Forewarning, it's rather long.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/20/2015 11:46:00 AM

An expressive write filled with longing. Great write, James! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2015 11:42:00 AM

Oh James I am struggling for inspiration with this contest - WOW you have nailed it - good luck in the contest hope Nette loves this as much as I do:-) hugs jan xx 7

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/20/2015 11:29:00 AM

This is very well written with impeccable imagery and outstanding pros. Emile.