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Pizza - Listing Makes - a Robust Treat

PIZZA- LISTING MAKES - A ROBUST TREAT Thin, thick or double crust...Tell me what you lust. Variant flavors, eye-wheel hush. Tickling your tastebuds to blush..Ham, vegy, pepperoni, it has.. Cheesy or saucy, it is just. Each piece, one great blast Oven-fresh a delicious trust! Mouth and nose will combust! Allured to pizza's smokey gust. Merrily! I'll eat two or three. Especially when given for free. Though sometimes, I crave whole. For each savory part a full! One or two takes, isn't a big ache. Healthy body will not be at stake.For you can choose each flake. Combine it with fresh juicy shake. If you got much, do some quakes. So fats and big bellies will break. All these makes pizza one robust treat _________________________________ Sponsor Sheri Fresonke Harper Contest Name The Subject Listing Makes Us ______ Placed 1st (c) Olive Eloisa 4:54pm revised: May 05, 2014 NOTE: VEGY i shortened the word vegetable :D

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Date: 11/24/2014 12:05:00 PM
Blimey, I've already asked you out for a Coffee & a Doughnut. In for a penny, in for a pound, fancy a Pizza your choice, James ;-)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 2:57:00 AM
hahah :) thanks much James.. :) pizza is one good pig out food.. :D
Date: 6/19/2014 4:15:00 PM
This poem took some work to perfect. I love the imagery AND I love pizza, so it truly makes me hungry to imitate the form. Good work, Olive ! -- Keith
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 5:32:00 PM
Thank you KEith.. :D and I too love pizza.. :D let's go buy one and sit and have lil chit chat.. :D jokes!! God bless. :)
Date: 6/19/2014 3:58:00 PM
Congrats on winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Sara.. :) yes its way way to go.. :D
Date: 6/18/2014 8:39:00 AM
Excellent win, Olive - so yummy for my tummy! I'll have an everything pizza, thank you:-)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/19/2014 5:05:00 PM
hahaha :D no problem Pandita.. :) let's go!
Date: 6/17/2014 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win in the subject listing contest, Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/18/2014 2:03:00 AM
ThAnk you too..:)
Date: 6/17/2014 6:15:00 PM
My mouth is watering.... Congrats Olive...hugs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/18/2014 2:02:00 AM
Let's go eat pizza..:D
Date: 6/17/2014 5:19:00 PM
Dear Olive, If my diet goes bust, your poem will be the culprit. LOL I love it! Congratulations, my friend.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/18/2014 2:01:00 AM
Hahaha Carolyn..:)!! I have advice I said do some shakes...:D!
Date: 6/17/2014 4:26:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS Olive_eloi!!! Top spot once again:) You managed to make a well-shaped pizza with delightful ingredients. I would not mind sharing one with you....thin crusty base, pls. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/17/2014 4:59:00 PM
Thank you PAul.. :) i didn't expect this.. :) hahha yes that's my favorite too thin crusted pizza.. :D
Date: 6/17/2014 2:05:00 PM
Great thought, form and poem. congratulations on your first place. Love, joyce
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/17/2014 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Joyce.. :) I appreciate it much.. :D
Date: 6/17/2014 1:32:00 PM
Olive, excellent poem, I am glad you shared your interest with us all. Congratulations on your win! Sorry for the late results, thanks very much for entering my contest.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/17/2014 4:58:00 PM
That's alright Sheri.. :) Thank you very much for the place,... :) i didn't expect to be at the top.. :) but thank you.. :)
Date: 1/18/2014 6:56:00 PM
Oh my friend I am hungry for pizza know lol. Kudos good write friend
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Date: 1/19/2014 2:10:00 PM
OK I will get one and send it special delivery lol
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/19/2014 1:51:00 PM
hurry buy one and share :D hahahah i want hawaian with lots of cheese :D

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