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With luscious lips, like succulent cherries, glistening morsels kissed by morning dew, her rouge-tinted cheeks like pink strawberries. She's the undisputed queen of fairies eyes of aquamarine and glacial blue, with luscious lips like succulent cherries. Her hair flows like the wheat on the prairies shimmering locks of gold and amber hue, her rouge-tinted cheeks like pink strawberries. Her mysterious smile seldom varies, a look that is provocative and true with luscious lips like succulent cherries. Her sweet, subtle scent lingers and carries an aroma that's known to but a few, her rouge-tinted cheeks like pink strawberries. A virgin imp from the loins of Aries, a prize many men would wish to pursue. With luscious lips like succulent cherries, her rouge-tinted cheeks like pink strawberries. (Villanelle) 1/9/2015

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Date: 2/25/2018 7:59:00 PM
The form is delightfully executed with luscious fruity imagery. The "queen of fairies" gives that additional level of fantasy and magic. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I do so appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 6/24/2015 8:41:00 PM
Lovely villanelle, Emile. Congrats!
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Kim, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/24/2015 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:28:00 AM
Love the poem and the photo.
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Richard, as always I appreciate your generous support. Emile.
Date: 6/24/2015 1:37:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, as always I appreciate your generous support. Emile.
Date: 6/24/2015 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations. Linda
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Linda, as always I appreciate your generous support. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 9:18:00 PM
wow, one of the prettiest villanelles I think I ever read. Awesome and congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, as always I appreciate your generous support. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 9:08:00 PM
A luscious write that suits the style so well. Nice work, Emile. Regards,Viv
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Viv, As always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 12:35:00 PM
superb Emile congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 6/23/2015 1:54:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest, Emile.
Date: 1/14/2015 2:32:00 AM
I'm having a love affair with the villanelle right now & this is a gorgeous example of why. Beautiful flow.
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Rachel, your comments are both welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/12/2015 9:57:00 AM
The title looked so interesting I had to see what you had to say - glad I did. This is a delicious write my friend. Love, daver
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/12/2015 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for your vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 1/10/2015 4:30:00 PM
Love this beautiful Villanelle, Emile! It happens to be one of my favourite forms. Repeat lines are not as easy as one might assume...there's a 'crafty' line of thought involved! If the repeat lines fail, then all the poem falls to pieces. All the best. // paul (just noticed Olive's comment; Chariot of Fire, a Villanelle, was our latest collaboration.)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/10/2015 5:14:00 PM
My deepest and sincere thanks for your words of praise and acknowledgment, Emile.
Date: 1/10/2015 12:07:00 PM
A delightful villanelle, Emile. A fun read.
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Date: 1/10/2015 12:13:00 PM
You bring a smile to my day as I bask in the after glow of your praise. Thank you. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2015 7:36:00 PM
very beautiful and love your repeating lines.. :)! ME and PAul got a tandem in a villanelle with internal rhymes as added challenge.. :)! Chariot of Fire.. :)! this very luscious portrait! love it.. :D!//olive eloisa
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Date: 1/9/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thank you so much...your comments are always most welcomed and eagerly sought. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2015 2:51:00 PM
I too have never written in this form i adore the impact of the repeated lines - such amazing imagery - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2015 2:58:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan, for your generous support. Emile.
Date: 1/9/2015 2:38:00 PM
Very impressive poetry, Emile! I'm not familiar with the Villanelle format, but I like it very much! Thanks for sharing! :)
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Laura, your comments are welcomed and appreciated. Emile.

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