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Pink and Distinct

Still air Hesitation What went Wrong Too much Smoke filled Lungs So raw Still sarcasm In vain Why'd I say That And why did You stop Talking Too early Still bodies Stale mate In minutes Before we Could get Beyond ourselves I wish we Knew this before hand Still night Smoke rises And blows North It's not like Before When lungs Were so raw

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Date: 4/28/2010 12:50:00 AM
Thank you. You actually nailed it :).
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:48:00 AM
Gives me visions of a persons first cigerrette being compared to ones first love. Excellent write.
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