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picture perfect

this was his chance
a picnic to seduce her
in the meadow
   where the last girl was buried
   he spread out the red blanket...

for "the picture perfect" contest

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Full of suspense and horror in so few lines. Great job!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 9:05:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS SUSAN,, Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:03:00 PM
    nice win... always..PD

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Susan, even without imagery being used very much , the "story" that this evokes leaves such an impression on the mind! For me, this is GREAT tanka. WEll, I don't know if I understand anything about tanka, but I sure love it. Congrats!!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Wonderful piece...Congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Reminds me of an old movie I just watched.......yikes !! Twilight Zone fodder !

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:12:00 PM
    This sent chills, congrats!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 11:53:00 PM
    If Alfred Hitchcock were alive today, he would present a show based on this write. Congratulations, this is a good one.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 10:49:00 AM
    Wow, this is scary!! You're good at these Tankas!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 4:03:00 AM
    Congratulations. Rick

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:51:00 PM
    congrats on your win Susan

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:00:00 PM
    It doesn't take many words to scare us.........terrific piece!!

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:07:00 PM
    congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Short and scary , well done Susan congratulations love xx

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win. I'll be posting a blog with additional comments. Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Ups! A chilling Write here,Susan.Scary but very Nice one:-) Unfortunately..there will be no picnic this..LOL

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 2:02:00 AM
    soupmail. I need HELP

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 8:09:00 AM
    Dear Susan - My favorite of the week. What a concept. Thanks for your comment and I am fine. I've got you in my favorites list, but have have been slow to pull it up. I don't see you at PFT anymore, but may not recognize you without "Black-Eyed" love you, kathy

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 1:48:00 AM

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:35:00 AM
    Good morning Susan, hope you are well?? and drinking all the chicken soup... wink! anyways, I'm only stopping by cuz I haven't heard from you in such a long long time.... I'm wondering if you have forgotten me. well i better let you go, I'm leaving work early today. LOL, and thank you for the nice and lovely hi on my Facebook this morning... I'm still waiting for this to be my day. I mean that is what you said ...:-) wink! wink! luv~PD