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               awakes, striding seamlessly towards the
              trajectory of daybreak. Abed, passionately
                  attended by orectic thoughts; of whom
              early on was created from man’s thoracic cage.

      Without the least trace of compunction; exfoliating the 
    Saccharine damped canal with the tongue. Combined oils 
and aroma lingers on the lips. Though the stiffened, unbridled, 
      solid thick muscle would supersede the tongue as the
      warm tightened canal adjusts to its width inextricably.

                           Waterfalls pouring profusely
                               Eyes trudge backwards 
                                  to that of yesterday
                                   Fingers ascendant
                                  to the nearest limb. 
                        Digits of the foot holding forth 
                             discourse with the sun.

                                      In due course.
                                 Garnished bed linens 
                                     Accompanied by
                                       Whitish fluid 


                                     "1st Pace Winner"

Contest Name: Best Descriptive Poem

Pace, G


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  1. Date: 2/6/2014 6:17:00 PM
    You were right, I love it! Thanks for the very well written expression :-) Very enticing

    Date: 2/7/2014 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by!! All smiles :)
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Pace, Passion unbridled--well deserved first!!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:32:00 AM
    A deserving win... congrats ~ A.O

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:06:00 AM
    hmmmm...highly descriptive poem friend Pace.. a grand winner indeed..Congratulations!! cheers!! Maria

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:26:00 AM
    Congrats on well deserved win....Donna

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:44:00 AM
    Orectic - new word for me. Nice erotica!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:16:00 AM
    Pace, congrats on your win, amazing write. Rick

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:38:00 PM
    Pace, congrats on your first place win with this highly descriptive poem! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:22:00 PM
    congrats on a great win G

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:08:00 PM
    Hello Pace, it was a joy an honor, in having your poem in my contest.. especially this poem in which I found very descriptive in every way possible. you moved plenty of sweet thoughts... Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:48:00 AM
    A little erotic with a touch of class nicely done poet

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 12:59:00 AM
    INK, Rapturous! well done, with printed words you have awakened all my senses, and I really do appreciate that ability. X Peace Ruby

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:16:00 AM
    I had to first look up the word phantasmagoria Pace, then I could know where you were headed with this piece of eroticism. Enjoyed where it took me! :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 12:45:00 AM
    phantasmagoria indeed, pace... ravishing!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 1:14:00 PM
    Creative and classy! I enjoyed this!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 3:46:00 PM
    very sophisticated write here, i love it!!!!!!~smiles~

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:30:00 PM
    well, I"LL SAY!!! Now I get the title!!!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Didn't I comment this poem already. Still loving it. I read your comment on pd's blog. Howdy Neighbor. She failed to mention your from Houston. Luv Skat

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 7:30:00 PM
    Yes!! Yes!! I love it! Well done and as always, very sophisticated vocabulary. Keep witing, I am a FAN!