Petals In the Wind

Petals in the wind I saw
with my girl one day.
On some boughs of trees they stirred
with a gentle sway.

As they moved, the wind picked up
till that mighty breeze
blew the petals all at once
off the pretty trees.

Then the petals danced around
swirling to the ground
like small ballerinas whose
slippers make no sound.

Crimson, pink and purple, they -
like bright butterflies -
fluttered and sashayed before
our enchanted eyes.

Suddenly the air went still.
Petals everywhere
fell to ground while some adorned
my sweet daughter’s hair.

Happily she shook them out,
turned to me and grinned.
No more would we see that day
petals in the wind.


For PD's third contest for poems about nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/20/2021 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. It is so pretty to see petals raining down. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.....................
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Date: 1/19/2021 9:19:00 PM
HAPPY TO SEE ON YOUR USUAL RANK. CONGRATS.
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:10:00 PM
very lovely and awesomely crafted!! .. Congratulations on your high win ,Andrea!!! :O)))
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Date: 5/25/2014 11:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win my friend!!!!
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Date: 5/25/2014 10:01:00 PM
Nice write and very cute.
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Date: 5/25/2014 7:24:00 PM
Wonderful story Andrea...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:33:00 PM
Wonderful moment, recaptured or created, carried me to the field and the dancing petals. congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/25/2014 3:54:00 PM
Quite beautiful Andre...A perfect mother/daughter moment...hugs Tim
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Date: 5/25/2014 1:37:00 PM
Very lovely Andrea ! U hv created a real pic wid ur words dear ! Congrats on wonderful win !
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Date: 5/25/2014 12:43:00 PM
Andrea, , Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda
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Date: 2/27/2013 7:20:00 PM
Congrats on this win, thank you for reading Wild Strawberries for the second time ;}
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Date: 2/4/2013 7:07:00 PM
Nicely done with the petals in the wind. love phyl
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:46:00 PM
Many many congrats for this win dear Andrea.
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Date: 2/3/2013 1:01:00 PM
Love it and here we are again with the congrats , you are good you know xx
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Date: 2/3/2013 9:25:00 AM
Enchanting write Andrea ....congrats on a wonderful win! Hugs
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Date: 2/2/2013 9:05:00 AM
It's always a pleasure to read your poems,Andrea.Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/2/2013 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:07:00 AM
My ahhhhh moment of the day...such a lovely descriptive poem. Well deserved spot on the winners list ...Congrats !!
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:31:00 AM
this is so wonderful....congrats on a well deserved win...:))))))
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:06:00 PM
Hello Andrea, A beautiful sway, and rhytm you have given to the view with your daughter. The prettiest crimson image ever. Tobad you did not chase the butteflies. ;-) I'm glad you savor the one in a life time moment... Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/31/2013 7:19:00 PM
A pleasant and easy read. Very enjoyable! RAY
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Date: 1/31/2013 6:17:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2013 3:56:00 PM
Andrea a beautiful poem. Easily envisioned scene you created: of petals falling like ballerinas slippers making no sound, like bright butterflies fluttered and sashayed, happily she shook them out, turned to you and grin. Wonderful images. This should be put in a poem of books for mothers and daughter. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
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Date: 1/31/2013 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Such great poetic quality..Sara
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Date: 1/31/2013 2:26:00 PM
I can smell those petals in the wind... So real your poem sounds. Congrats Andrea... And about inky winky , I am sorry... And a little secret , as a kid, I was scared of teddy bears... ;)
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