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Petals In the Wind

Entering the gates of spring A new panorama unfolding Almond blossoms all around Oodles of beauty all around Splendid white flowering trees Petals on the ground layered To welcome the onlooker to the heavenly sights Under each tree Petal showering down And playing with the wind A smile on each face Such view brings A dance of smiles and petals A dance of wind and fragrance Spring air and blossoms Dancing to the tunes of nature Wings gifted to all the viewers Each lifted to a dreamland Dreamland of heavenly bliss Each kiss of petals falling from the trees Makes you feel lighter and lighter And in no time, everyone starts dancing With those petals in the wind…
Irfana Ali Bhat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/3/2013 6:51:00 PM
another beauty in the winners list me to review. Congrats, Irfana. I remember commenting on this one before and your win is well deserved.
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Date: 2/3/2013 5:23:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2013 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning Irfana luv, sorry it's late xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:34:00 AM
What a joyful happy poem...I'm dancing with you !! So lovely !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:17:00 PM
Hello irfana, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/20/2013 11:17:00 AM
Wow, I love it. I am transfixed by this gorgeous dance you have choreographed. Thanks so much for your visits, I am always moved by your thoughtful comments.
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:36:00 AM
Irfana yep this definitely lifts me up, well done...David
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Date: 1/19/2013 8:18:00 PM
wow. Irfana, very impressive!!! I hope I can try this contest and do one this well. Thanks for your comment to my "sat and pondered" poem. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/19/2013 11:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem, Irfana! Best wishes in the contest. Love , Kim
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/20/2013 10:12:00 AM
thanks kim....:))
Date: 1/19/2013 9:39:00 AM
Your words dance within my mind like the perals in the wind.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/20/2013 10:12:00 AM
thanks..:))
Date: 1/19/2013 8:59:00 AM
See you have come back with such a beautiful poem!Love this.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/20/2013 10:12:00 AM
ur advice helped....thanks kash..:))

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