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"perfect design"

You live your life to honor Him

But instead you lead a life full of shame and sin

take your beliefs and need for repetition

and continue to walk in the wrong direction

feed your lies to the brainwashed child

who believes they are a free thinker but are instead just a figure of your "perfect 

A scheme that you learned from your father

And have passed on to your sons and your daughters

Repeat the cycle and spin the wheel

Continue to live your life of evil

Brainwash the child, don't let him think on his own

Fill his mind with thoughts that are now his own

Don't allow him to break the mold

Rape his mind and leave him blind to follow the footsteps of your "perfect design"

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  1. Date: 11/19/2009 12:32:00 PM
    Wow. i like this one. Nicely written.