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Pebbles

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Pebbles

Kieselsteine / Pebbles / Guijarros   

Die Kieselsteine
So herrlich glänzend leuchtend  
Im klaren Bergbach


Colourful pebbles
So lovely bright and shining
In the mountain creek


Colorido guijarros
Hermoso y brillante y luminosa
En el arroyo 

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  1. Date: 3/16/2011 10:10:00 PM
    A WONDERFUL POEM GERT,, vividly bright and i love the scenery... have a great saint Patrick's day,,,, take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 8:18:00 AM
    This one conjures up a lovely picture, Gert. And it looks so beautiful written in German! So sad about Helga and her whole family. The theatre, where I work, recently staged a play about Anne Frank - very moving indeed. I suppose that, rightly or wrongly, Anne Frank has come to represent all the victims for many of us. It was very touching to hear of an individual like Helga. Have a great day : ) Jack

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 8:52:00 PM
    Well done, Gert! Merci beaucoup pour les gentils commentaires sur mes poèmes! Alles Gute! Caroline.

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 3:22:00 PM
    This is lovely too!! like those colorful pebbles.

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 1:47:00 PM
    Nice observation and nicely penned with great images, Gert

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 11:18:00 AM
    What an image, Gert. I would love to see the pebbles sparkling in the creek. Exquisite poem, my friend. People used to leave old bottles on the beach in NJ. As they broke apart and were brushed and polished by the ocean, they looked like the "colorful pebbles" you describe so well here. Hope your arm is healing, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 8:52:00 AM
    Yes! The sun sparkles those pebbles. this is beautiful. The Spanish is also beautiful, maybe even more so. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 8:14:00 AM
    Oh I luv writing about luv Gert my friend as u luv writing these brilliant visual lines so intriguing and so entertaining luv.. u set the stage so openly and invite the reader to enjoy the view .. thankxx luv...

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 7:54:00 AM
    lines 1 & 2 evoke wonderful sensation, I think you should work on the CUT line 3, I don't think you have a cut? perhaps I'm wrong though? Light & Love always