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Tomorrow In You

Our stroll in night rain fascinates my breaths anew, when lark calls a melody I find today, tomorrow in you. Chorus: Not even blooms or night rain, could endure her lasting charm that adorns glossed eyes with love-light,so deeply warm. And every morn evergreen every sigh touched by sweet dew, falls gently on air- brushed cheeks to find today, tomorrow in you. Chorus: Not even blooms or night rain, could endure her lasting charm that adorns glossed eyes with love-light, so deeply warm. It’s you wandering on my mind, that precious is this breathless view while in silence, in longing I find tomorrow… in you. Then let this fondness speak in a bolder, bolder hue my woman cherished for a lifetime dream until I find today, tomorrow... in you. --------- Your Best Love Song Ever Contest Sponsor:The Seeker submitted 2/11/2017 Lyric Form

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Date: 2/17/2017 8:50:00 PM
Hi Nette, These are some amazing lyrics. They're soooo romantic! Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/16/2017 9:38:00 PM
Congrats Nette, you are always on top or close, that should tell you something!
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Date: 2/16/2017 8:06:00 PM
Nette a huge congrats to you. I heard the song. It's so beautiful with the music.
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Date: 2/15/2017 11:09:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win, Nette:) the lyrics are amazing and Mark has done a beautiful job too:) a 7:)
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Date: 2/15/2017 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations Nette, wonderful win and Mark did a great job putting it to music, just beautiful...
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Date: 2/13/2017 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations nette!! Hugggs deb.
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Date: 2/13/2017 7:11:00 PM
Beautiful..
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Date: 2/22/2016 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations nette on the success of this poem! Continue writing and share the blessings of poetry! :) _hans
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:11:00 AM
Congrats on top win dear friend.. Till I find today, tomorrow in you.. Love it!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:44:00 PM
Hi Nette, congratulations on your placement in the contest. Such a gentle flow of beauty in words.
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Date: 2/21/2016 12:49:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win in the 'rainy days' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:54:00 AM
Sooo beautiful! Congratulations my dear friend, Nette! I'm so glad to read this very wonderful winning piece of yours tonight! Thank you so much for sharing! Miss you! love lots and big hugs, GL
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:31:00 AM
Congrats, Nette. I love your rhymes.
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on you placement!!
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:47:00 PM
Nette, thank you for the Rainy Day theme win. With Love... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:06:00 PM
Nette, Thanks for the Support *SKAT*
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Date: 7/6/2015 7:00:00 PM
Hi nette: A beautiful poem on reflection. My compliments.
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:30:00 PM
- Dear Nette, I enjoy reading this .... just beautiful! - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:16:00 PM
Loved to listen to your words in a song Nette, it's beautiful, and the imagery is wonderful~hugs//James :) :)
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Date: 7/6/2015 11:20:00 AM
Oh poetry of old, even Shelly would have loved to have written this....he certainly would love it
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Date: 7/6/2015 10:25:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem nette, I found the melody to be difficult because there was always a couple more extra beats at the end of each stanza, good luck with this contest
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Date: 7/6/2015 9:58:00 AM
Mellow kind of rhythm--graceful poem tenderly structured! *Sighs*
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:33:00 AM
Nette, pretty lyrics for soothing music, an enchanting 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, helping the old
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Date: 7/6/2015 5:39:00 AM
Magical combination of lyricism, visual imagery and inviting poetry. I think this is breathtaking!
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:55:00 AM
oh so beautiful Nette - I have listened to the music but cannot be inspired to write:-) hugs Jan xx
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