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Past Art.

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Past Art.

Past Art.

Feel the screaming call of the haunted past.
Begging for anther ponder
just one more mindless wonder?.
	
As I try unbind my mind from this twisted thought
that you are still wishing that I fought
Stuck in  time as the clock tick forwards,

I have no doubt i saw something.
a spark of life, cant describe it,
but you felt you must hide it.

	 	
As you paint this picture perfect puzzle
Of a pretty lady with out pain or struggle.
Never hurt or even miss stood in a puddle.
	
Art thrown over to mislead the other.
but i saw it.
	
The part of you, you missed to cover,
The part of you , you want no one to discover.

Wild acts and thoughts I want to tame.
but you an unfinished picture,
just not worth the frame...

Failing to keep colours with in your lies..
are those even real tears in your eyes?

08/09/2010

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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 4:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Graeme. Love Carol

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Graeme. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 12:33:00 PM
    Interesting write Graeme, your last two lines does it for me.. Enjoyed reading :) Wilma Ps: Welcome to Poetry Soup

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 1:17:00 PM
    Good control of flow, lovely change of pace, powerful opening line ... interesting read. Come by anytime, my friend, you are so welcome here.

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 10:10:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Graeme. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol