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Passion's Flower

I’m the violet of your sweetest fantasy

purple is the fragrance of my passion

I blush pink just thinking of you

breathe me deeply, darling; let me flower


written 7/26/14 by Andrea Dietrich
For THE PASSION OF A JUE JU Contest of nette onclaud

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/23/2014 4:55:00 PM

Think I read this before but did not comment. Nice one. love phyl

Robin Davis

Date: 8/12/2014 9:31:00 PM

Andrea This is such a passionately, sexy, romantic and sweet write. You captivated me with so much imagery and emotion. Thank you for the great comment on my Nerd And Geek poem.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/5/2014 6:58:00 PM

Oh inviting! well done :) grats on your wonderful win!!!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/4/2014 10:21:00 PM

Sweet poem Andrea, beautifully done

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/4/2014 8:43:00 PM

This is a great one my friend. Congrats!!!

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/4/2014 7:28:00 PM

violet,purple. pink, a lot of color in such a short poem..skillful my friend..congratulation for your win

David Mohn

Date: 8/4/2014 6:44:00 PM

Love the beautiful colors emoting here Andrea...wonderful

John Lawless

Date: 8/4/2014 6:39:00 PM

"OH, le puff, le pant, le gasp!!!!! I knew I'd be chasing this one to the finish.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/4/2014 4:55:00 PM

Lovely and romantic.......I'm taking a deep breath......lol !! Well done, Andrea!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/4/2014 10:03:00 AM

a nice soft write, Andrea. congrats. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2014 7:39:00 AM

Passionate write from an apt angle, Andrea. congrats

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2014 7:06:00 AM

Lovely passionate Jue Ju Andrea ! Congrats on great win !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2014 4:42:00 AM

Passionate winning Jeu Ju ..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/3/2014 12:24:00 PM

Congrats on your passionate write Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/29/2014 3:52:00 PM

Ypu know I am a great fan of your poetfy..but lady,this is one of the most beautiful I ever read read of yours and all.So feminine and sweet.Going to my favorites

Len Gasun

Date: 7/29/2014 11:41:00 AM

A very beautiful and romantic poem my dearest friend Andrea. I love it so much. Giving u & this poem a huge hug. A winner for me. Thank a lot for sharing. Good luck always. By the way, belated thanks for your visit on my poem and blog. I'm really sorry, if i seldom have time to come here yet. Lookin forward for longer holidays soon so I can stay longer/come more often here. Missing everyone already! I'll come back to read more of your stellar poems soon. God bless. love much always, Leonora

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/27/2014 11:30:00 PM

Very good example of romanticism here. Fine work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/27/2014 9:05:00 PM

Your passion shines and shines. "breathe me deeply, darling; let me flower" A golden line my friend!! A gem very worthy of a fine poet's heart methinks.....

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/27/2014 7:42:00 PM

the poem matches your heart. pink and purple and bold and lovely and rich. Hot 7 rate and you might just do very well in the contest:) Oh, BTW, I sent you a bunch of responses on those last two comments, I know you might not look at them if I don't let you know they are there! Plz go back and read!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/27/2014 7:07:00 PM

I have a sudden urge to do some gardening. I think this one will come up roses.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/27/2014 5:58:00 PM

Excellent write, Andrea; I see you chose the 7 word lines; I based mine on 5 words. We both inserted passion in our titles! gl // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/4/2014 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea...another top placing!:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/27/2014 2:29:00 PM

Andie can you correct my poem so it is MORE iambic I WAS trying for meter? maybe I did a different meter? Show me what you see me doing? [magic is often called jue ju ;)] L & L

John Lawless

Date: 7/27/2014 9:55:00 AM

Well, Andrea, that just reheated my coffee. I think we'll all be chasing this on to the finish line.