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Passion's Flower

I’m the violet of your sweetest fantasy purple is the fragrance of my passion I blush pink just thinking of you breathe me deeply, darling; let me flower written 7/26/14 by Andrea Dietrich For THE PASSION OF A JUE JU Contest of nette onclaud

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Date: 10/23/2014 4:55:00 PM
Think I read this before but did not comment. Nice one. love phyl
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Date: 8/12/2014 9:31:00 PM
Andrea This is such a passionately, sexy, romantic and sweet write. You captivated me with so much imagery and emotion. Thank you for the great comment on my Nerd And Geek poem.
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Date: 8/5/2014 6:58:00 PM
Oh inviting! well done :) grats on your wonderful win!!!
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Date: 8/4/2014 10:21:00 PM
Sweet poem Andrea, beautifully done
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:43:00 PM
This is a great one my friend. Congrats!!!
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:28:00 PM
violet,purple. pink, a lot of color in such a short poem..skillful my friend..congratulation for your win
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Date: 8/4/2014 6:44:00 PM
Love the beautiful colors emoting here Andrea...wonderful
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Date: 8/4/2014 6:39:00 PM
"OH, le puff, le pant, le gasp!!!!! I knew I'd be chasing this one to the finish.
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:55:00 PM
Lovely and romantic.......I'm taking a deep breath......lol !! Well done, Andrea!
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Date: 8/4/2014 10:03:00 AM
a nice soft write, Andrea. congrats. Mohan
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:39:00 AM
Passionate write from an apt angle, Andrea. congrats
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:06:00 AM
Lovely passionate Jue Ju Andrea ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:42:00 AM
Passionate winning Jeu Ju ..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/3/2014 12:24:00 PM
Congrats on your passionate write Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/29/2014 3:52:00 PM
Ypu know I am a great fan of your poetfy..but lady,this is one of the most beautiful I ever read read of yours and all.So feminine and sweet.Going to my favorites
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Date: 7/29/2014 11:41:00 AM
A very beautiful and romantic poem my dearest friend Andrea. I love it so much. Giving u & this poem a huge hug. A winner for me. Thank a lot for sharing. Good luck always. By the way, belated thanks for your visit on my poem and blog. I'm really sorry, if i seldom have time to come here yet. Lookin forward for longer holidays soon so I can stay longer/come more often here. Missing everyone already! I'll come back to read more of your stellar poems soon. God bless. love much always, Leonora
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Date: 7/27/2014 11:30:00 PM
Very good example of romanticism here. Fine work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:05:00 PM
Your passion shines and shines. "breathe me deeply, darling; let me flower" A golden line my friend!! A gem very worthy of a fine poet's heart methinks.....
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:42:00 PM
the poem matches your heart. pink and purple and bold and lovely and rich. Hot 7 rate and you might just do very well in the contest:) Oh, BTW, I sent you a bunch of responses on those last two comments, I know you might not look at them if I don't let you know they are there! Plz go back and read!
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:07:00 PM
I have a sudden urge to do some gardening. I think this one will come up roses.
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:58:00 PM
Excellent write, Andrea; I see you chose the 7 word lines; I based mine on 5 words. We both inserted passion in our titles! gl // paul
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Date: 8/4/2014 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea...another top placing!:)
Date: 7/27/2014 2:29:00 PM
Andie can you correct my poem so it is MORE iambic I WAS trying for meter? maybe I did a different meter? Show me what you see me doing? [magic is often called jue ju ;)] L & L
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:55:00 AM
Well, Andrea, that just reheated my coffee. I think we'll all be chasing this on to the finish line.
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:34:00 AM
there are many stars in the heavens, but one shine brightest of all....
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:12:00 AM
This is yet another example of why you win so many contests Andrea! Lovely!
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