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A poem sleeps in my body In an upright state, And you come into me. In the broadway of my heart I think about you in the heavy traffic I lay bare my desire. I search your body A vowel, a consonant, a simile. To find a single- syllable-title. I breathe only in your mouth With the words I have in my mind To compose a poem. I whisper into your ears To hear the echoes of the words To feel the sound effect. With overflowing ideas in my head I touch your curved lips To get my poem mould. Deep in the vault of your mouth I feel my poem & hear it In the firmament of my heaven.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/15/2014 9:37:00 PM
Dr. Ram Your desire and passion for poetry is clearly written with such feeling it flows from your heart. Thank you for the great comment on my Garden poem.
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Date: 7/29/2010 12:08:00 AM
Beautiful triplets Ram,like the phrase'the broadway of my heart' very apt.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/28/2010 5:38:00 AM
Its marvelous to read your desire!!!!!!!! You shape it perfectly!!!!!!!!! This shows all you want to show and also hidden emotions!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/27/2010 9:46:00 PM
Very beautiful, tracing a poem's inception back to a sensitive and receptive heart. I am sure many will relate to this one, well done.
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:00:00 PM
That is the true feeling of a real poet/poetess. Excellent write.
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Date: 7/23/2010 1:56:00 PM
so full of passion and desire. love the sense of finding and capturing ideas.
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:27:00 AM
A very passionate write ~ full of flowing ideas ~ I like how you get your inspiration ~
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:09:00 AM
Oh wow--Dr. Ram, I think you've captured the "passion for poetry" perfectly here! Amazing write! Enjoyed this one!! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/23/2010 4:29:00 AM
Oh Dr...this is just beautiful....beautiful as a breath...love it...thanks for the pleasure in the mind..^_^ v
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:27:00 AM
wow, Dr. Ram, I think this is one of the best I have ever seen from you. And look at that. NO wonder. it is your passion. A big fav for this one!!
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Date: 7/22/2010 6:33:00 PM
very touching!
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Date: 7/22/2010 3:38:00 PM
In the broadway of my heart.. what a powerful line Dr. Ram.. so enjoyed this lovely piece from your gifted pen today my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/22/2010 5:28:00 AM
Awesome poem, Dr. Ram! Enjoyed the read this early afternoon. And thank you for your comments! Have a nice day!....Gert
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Date: 7/22/2010 4:52:00 AM
Excellent thoughts that express what so many of us here at soup feel..To be able to find just the correct way to express what we want to implant into another's heart..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Got leftover eggplant for today..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2010 2:51:00 AM
awesome expression here, love the poem. Harry. P.S I've mistakenly placed the wrong sonnet in your contest, i'll remove it and replace.
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Date: 7/21/2010 7:57:00 PM
Excellent description of the process of poetic inspiration and execution, Dr. Ram. My crystalline didn't make it into the contest, but it was fun to write. Hope you are doing well. I am on vacation. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2010 12:18:00 PM
Very nice DR Ram..different and very sensual. Bg
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Date: 7/21/2010 12:14:00 PM
nice and sensual poem...I like the way you spoke of writing like a pasionate love!
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:34:00 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:29:00 AM
Oh wow....this is going into my favorite poems!!! This is brillant, just wonderful !!:)
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:59:00 AM
beautiful Dr. Ram, just beautiful
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Date: 7/21/2010 7:37:00 AM
Wow, Doc, awesome write. Thanks for your kind words. Have a great day. Ralph
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Date: 7/21/2010 7:32:00 AM
Very well written Doc, I enjoyed the fervor of this write...God Bless....Taz
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:38:00 AM
Wow this gem goes to my favs... Its passionate and beautiful,Its almost like a soft song to my ears...C.C
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:13:00 AM
Great write Dr. Ram, this has to be one of my favorites... Talent personified, Wilma
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