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Passion

Passion never awaits upon untrue intent she only endures hardened texts learned

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/15/2008 11:30:00 AM

This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. Passion has a lot of lessons embedded therein. Great job! ~ Joseph

Jane Bowen

Date: 6/13/2008 3:56:00 PM

Brilliant darling! As you are...a gem a diamond and a sapphire shining so brightly in this world and here at the soupie! The SHHHHOUPIE~! ;> he he he he I loved this!~ It's neat to see others put together a cinquain because there are so few words and it allows the reader to see how deep the poet can take them into their world~ You are a poetress of the times baby doll! LOVED in every corner at the shhhoupie~! Muah~ xxoxoxoxo :) ciao for now love bug~jane

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 6/12/2008 6:29:00 PM

Very passionate write, my dear you are full of that today! Well written cinquain! Kristin XO

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/12/2008 4:20:00 PM

Wow. Love this one. Lots of passion in the air. Good for you! : ) Love, Shar

Deneen White

Date: 6/12/2008 2:32:00 PM

such a few words that truly hits the target on the head, thank you for your welcome comments, take care D-nyce

Date: 6/12/2008 12:48:00 PM

There is a lot of depth to this concise format. Nice use of this format. The strong ending leaves the reader with something to think about. I enjoy writers that can make the most of a few words. You have accomplished that in this poem. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poetry. Karen