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Partner In Rhyme(Tanka 6-8-6-8-8)

Your rhythms help me rhyme You’re my friend and partner in crime…. I want you all the time to dine on your cooking sublime being with you makes my gong chime By Robb A. Kopp All Rights Reserved © MMX

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Date: 9/23/2010 10:20:00 AM
It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Robb. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:17:00 PM
Very creative and well expressed thoughts, rOBB
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Date: 9/22/2010 12:49:00 PM
Awesome Robb.. good luck in Chris's contest... perfect off the charts syllable count... mine is too.. I did the Japanese version of 31 syllable with "Steamy"...luv...
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Date: 9/22/2010 12:47:00 PM
A lovely tanka, Robb, and I wish you the best in Chris's new contest. I think I'll be taking a break for a while, but I wanted to thank you for your kind comment. Some folks here seem to intentionally hurt others. I just don't understand them. A few like Sara, Wilma and Carolyn have been very supportive and encouraging, but I don't want to feel the pain I had today when I learned people were unhappy with my poem winning. I'm sure you understand. Take care, Diane
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