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Parlor Mishap, Dream On

somehow they forgot to include one procedure they asked if I could help them move you to a bed I gladly helped lift you up and stroked your hair one last time... ***Edited version of a previous post

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Date: 8/16/2013 10:24:00 AM
this creates so much in one's mind Tim, yet still very moving...
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:40:00 PM
Ow this definitely gave me a lump in my troath in the last verse tim.
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Date: 8/8/2013 5:42:00 PM
I'm almost reluctant to comment on this one. It seems like a very private moment which touched you deeply. I love this gentle write, Tim. A warm hug to you, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 8/7/2013 11:26:00 PM
So sad and deeply touching. You've made me cry.
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:12:00 PM
If this is what I think it is.......very precious memory.....teary here....
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Date: 8/7/2013 2:12:00 PM
tim , I like this one. It seems so loving, but why is it called parlor mishap? what was the procedure that was missed?
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Date: 8/7/2013 2:12:00 PM
I agree with your comment made to me. I too adore the ocean! (but instead of a fish, I am a dolphin!)
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