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Paradise - Upon Golden Sands

Picturesque are these islands of Golden Sands Amidst hues of bonnie blue in the Sulu Sea Rearing columns of Palms in heavenly reach Admiration my eyes granted their canopy glee Distance is no object as we walk their shores I and my love in splish splashing paddle dips She turns takes my hands looking into my soul Encompassed we're engrossed lips to lips 25/12/2015 @ 15.18pm

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Skat A

Date: 12/28/2015 10:19:00 PM

James, a very nice win. SKAT

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 4:14:00 PM

Many thanks SKAT. A short poem that I so loved writing ~~ James :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2015 4:20:00 AM

James, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 4:13:00 PM

Hiya Linda, thank you kindly ~~ James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/28/2015 2:03:00 AM

Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic James.. congrats on big win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2015 7:38:00 PM

Beautifully written with great imagery, James. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/27/2015 6:16:00 PM

James, you described a truly wonderful paradise that you guys can and will enjoy.A7 Congrats on your fine win!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2015 3:13:00 PM

this is really nicely done, James. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/27/2015 10:53:00 AM

Very nice James enjoyed reading.

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/27/2015 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations on the 5th place win in the Paradise contest. Very descriptive and romantic.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2015 3:18:00 AM

So pleased to be back with congratulations, James! Much deserved! ~ Regards // paul

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 4:18:00 PM

Thank you ever so much Paul ~~ James :)

John Hamilton

Date: 12/27/2015 12:04:00 AM

Thanks James very nice acrostic, congrats on your placement!

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 4:10:00 PM

Thank you kindly John. A belated appreciation for honouring my poem in your fine contest. Kind regards, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/26/2015 7:03:00 AM

James, always I love the memories we have there, I will be so happy to share and embroider a new set of memories there.. =`) hugs tight!!! I love some lines here, the alliteration and the imagery is there.. =`) 2016 is coming!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 4:09:00 PM

Palawan was perfect Olive. Our pics from there are simply oozing us amidst the gorgeous sunshine and warm sands, mmmm ~~ hugs ~~ James xxxx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/25/2015 3:32:00 PM

How very lovely and romantic, James! The Sulu sea must be endowed with a magical spell:) I shall look out for this one on the winners' list! ~ Regards // paul

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 4:05:00 PM

Thank you Paul. Palawan is absolutely stunning. Our strolls amidst island hopping on beautiful sands was lovely. It's our desire to go back and spend a few days more than before. A blessed weekend to you ~~ kind regards ~~ James :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/25/2015 1:35:00 PM

heavenly,james... this is truly a paradise of love!..huggs

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 2:18:00 PM

Palawan has gripped Olive and I. We were in awe when we were there. It's our wish to revisit and stay a little longer on the sands. Wishing you a blessed weekend Nette, hugs//James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2015 10:07:00 AM

Oh this sounds like paradise you have found with your lovely soulmate James - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 12/25/2015 10:31:00 AM

We liked there so much, we're definitely going back. This time for more time on the beach ~~ hugs ~~ James xx