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Paradise

When I look into your eyes you take me away to paradise we'd sit beneath the trees watching the butterflies and the busy bees we'd listen to water trickling down the stream and on our face a smile would surly gleam there is no one around for as far as I can see for this special place is for you and for me paradise is a beautiful place I see it every time I look at your wonderful face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/16/2012 2:14:00 PM
Nice to read your work today. Light & Love
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:01:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to love, congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:14:00 AM
what a heartfelt love poem - congrats on being featured -
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Date: 4/9/2009 5:46:00 AM
Diane, this is such a beautiful love poem. Isn't it great to be in love. Congratulations on being featured. Smiles from Dane.
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Date: 4/8/2009 7:04:00 PM
I mlove the meaning and this is a great poem!!!-congraulations on being featured-smiles-hugs from your fellow souper-Rhonda Kay
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:38:00 AM
great poem with great meaning, congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:07:00 AM
Congratultions Diane on your feattured poem, thankyou for telling me about mine I didn't know. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:11:00 PM
"Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:11:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, nice poem by the way...Raul
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Diane.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:11:00 AM
Hello, it is indeed a paradise when you are with the one you love. Congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:04:00 AM
great lovepoetry Diane.Rgds brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/5/2009 4:40:00 PM
Just flows right off the tongue and into the heart. Vibrant and pleasant.
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Date: 4/5/2009 10:07:00 AM
a place we all wish for, you've captured in this fine poem! Diane, Best Always, Jim
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Date: 4/5/2009 10:07:00 AM
And what a paradise it is! such a pleasant read. Thank you.
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