Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Pandorax Box

Charles Melody Lightning Ink Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Pandorax Box which was written by poet Charles Melody Lightning Ink. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Best Charles Melody Lightning Ink Poems

+ Fav Poet

Pandorax Box


I saw the eyes as they called for me,
I felt the nearness as she
Smiled at me,
With undying love for passionate bliss.
Carried away by the moonlight in her eyes,
"another Adam to me you are"
She whispered quietly in my listening ears,
As she drew me to her sweating, swollen,
Crystal chest..."Eve?" my conscience 
Asked me within, yet overwhelmed by 
Her milky fleshy lips... i ignored my conscience.   
Now am deep deeper in, deepest in 
Her adamant capturing Eden....
I ate her candy, really sweet and spicy,
But am no more the best among the rest.
The Eve has slacken me to a slave,
Am no more brave,
Am starting from the cradle,
Oh! my conscience...
"where are thou? 
For in this hole, i hardly see the light".



Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/22/2010 6:49:00 AM
    Wisdoms after the fact. Thanks for sharing this story. It game me insight into men...they make loving mistakes, too. Great writing.

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 11:44:00 AM
    Once you sample the candy, it's hard to live without it, son. This is an excellent entry for John's contest and you know your mum is pulling for you to win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/30/2010 4:35:00 AM
    well written poem.... you have much talent.

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:24:00 PM
    IT sounds like she was a great temptress, Charles. AWEsome last line! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 2:32:00 PM
    good work. deep subject and truth. john h loving iii

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 12:48:00 PM
    That is wise words to shine your eyes before you bite the apple. I think this is a wonderful poem for the contest and good luck . Love mom

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:17:00 AM
    Wise words of advice from u Lightening Ink .. today .. with this breathtaking piece.. if for the new contest by John.. good luck my friend.. an awesome competitor for sure..with luv...