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Palomino

I see in the field, The beauty of his gallop; Grazing on the land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/27/2009 12:50:00 PM
I have never seen this and would like to someday, Elizabeth, sounds wonderful! nice write, jim
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:21:00 AM
Through your eyes...we can see it too! Thanks for that!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/25/2009 6:39:00 AM
I see it too! Excellent imagery! So free and beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/25/2009 3:45:00 AM
wonderful senryu! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:59:00 AM
Nice haiku Elizabeth..........Danielle
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:57:00 AM
Nice word painting of the Palomino. Tyler
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:41:00 AM
Beautiful work, I can picture it too...Raul
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:57:00 AM
There is beauty in the gallop, nice work
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Date: 3/24/2009 11:48:00 PM
Dear Elizabeth, Do YOU live in the mid-west? When I lived in Nevada it was Wild Mustangs Absolutely Awesome How YOU snapped this Picture so Clear, so Vivid I walk over, start to brushing his long Gold Mane Superb YOU are the Queen Of Senryu ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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