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Our Uni-Song

OUR UNI-SONG If only you are near, dear, how I'd like to stay here You are so special, my core nuclei among all celestial Can I hold you close as if each day our last to rose? With your sturdy heat gaze slowly consume me with each phase Together we'll make ends meet, I know united as one we can't be beat Dancing pressed in the moonlight; like an gulp of raw champagne delight Next to each other a sunset treasure, we can ponder. Facing tomorrows one at a time, love knots in pirouette notes of rhyme. Building a family drive by sheer affection Us - our uni-song, we sing without hesitation. My very soul rejoice if it's all you I befall. And if this life ends suddenly-- Don't you ever forget I am forever with thee... © O.E.Guillermo 9:23 pm, November 15, 2014

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Date: 11/19/2014 1:31:00 PM
Deep romantic feelings flow from this page, Olive_eloi! You promise your eternal true love to a lucky partner, on earth and in the after life. Well dine! // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/20/2015 8:26:00 AM
thanks much paul.. :)
Date: 11/17/2014 5:10:00 AM
"like an gulp of raw champagne delight" splendid- perfect olive. Love XXXXX rajat
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:51:00 AM
Thanks much Rajat.. :)! I appreciate your drop by.. :D!
Date: 11/16/2014 8:57:00 PM
Love in life, love in death, love in every breath...you've passed the threshold of affection Olive, you are deep within the unilove zone. I'm awed by the unbridled admission of your love for your partner." My core nuclei smong the celestial...Building a family drive by sheer affection." Deep feelings and metaphysics Olive...J.A.B.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/17/2014 12:11:00 AM
:D hahahaha so are all encourage to love and spread love.. :D! but don't have yet that partner.. this just some thoughts i have of my yearning to love.. :D! thanks much for dropping by.. :D! as always you are so generous with your comments, so encouraging.. :D!
Date: 11/15/2014 12:37:00 PM
- A beautiful and romantic poem Olive - Love is a better teacher than a philosopher - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/17/2014 12:09:00 AM
Indeed it is.. lots of verses in the Bible talks about love.. :)! but oh, the whole speaks of God's love.. :)! hope you did have a lovely weekend.. :D!
Date: 11/15/2014 9:30:00 AM
Love the line, a gulp of raw champagne delight. Endearing poetry Olive, warm and heartfelt, James :) :)
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:07:00 AM
:D thanks MR. JAmes.. :)!

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